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May 07, 2010 03:29

Title:Dethbed
Rating: PG-13
A/N: So I kinda sorta wrote myself into a corner on the new one- nothing big, just need to let something simmer overnight. The next chapter will be up tomorrow night. In the meantime, I went over to commentfic, and proceeded to write something up, only to find that when I went to post it, I'd read the prompt wrong. So ( Read more... )

leverage, alec hardison/eliot spencer

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elebridith May 7 2010, 09:36:35 UTC
You really have a thing for making me wibble for those two... *g*

And psst... there's a lonely "Though" at the end... unfinished sentence?

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jendavis May 7 2010, 19:19:33 UTC
Thanks for the heads up!

You know what the really funny thing was? When I set down to write this, the idea I had was actually, funny. Seriously. :)

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elebridith May 7 2010, 20:02:55 UTC
Well, the last paragraph IS pretty funny. *g* Muses are tricky, aren't they?

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jendavis May 7 2010, 21:34:24 UTC
No kidding! And it's usually some tiny detail that nobody would notice that ends up setting me off on an entirely new thing that, well, turns out not to work in the first place. Oh well. :)

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scout_lover May 7 2010, 21:05:49 UTC
Oh, whew, I was all prepared to sob like a baby! Though you did raise a serious lump in my throat. (Yeah, I see you preening there.)

Very, very nice! Poor Alec. Because it would *have* to be him to do this if, God forbid, any of them did go down. I love how you have his mind wandering. Very much him.

And, yes, those corners are tricky things. I've written myself into a few of them over the years. I even once had a character bilocate! Always fun giving them new talents, lol.

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jendavis May 7 2010, 21:32:40 UTC
Actually, bilocation would be really useful right now, with the story. IF ONLY I WERE WRITING A DOCTOR WHO CROSSOVER! Argh. But, it's straightened out, now, and I'm about to post it.

Thanks dear! And yes, I am preening. ;)

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jendavis May 8 2010, 03:26:07 UTC
Thanks dear!

LOL! That's so true, I hadn't even thought about it, but you're totally right!

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theshi May 8 2010, 14:54:14 UTC
*sighs happily* I was totally prepared for a deathfic, so I'm quite relieved now. Still, stupid boys, always making way more drama than neccessary D:

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jendavis May 8 2010, 17:56:35 UTC
Yeah. I almost went that route, but I really don't like deathfics. Which is strange, since I tend to write fairly angsty stuff, but who knows.. :) Glad you liked!

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elebridith May 10 2010, 09:41:11 UTC
but I really don't like deathfics

And that is very good to know. *relieved sigh*

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honeyjojames May 8 2010, 18:23:54 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! You totally had me prepared for a deathfic there, I was so relieved when Eliot said sinus headache!

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jendavis May 9 2010, 23:08:32 UTC
Yeah, I don't think I could write deathfic. I'm a little too firmly entrenched in the "beat the hell out of them and make them make out" camp to pull it off. :)

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