Staring at the Sun, Prologue

[jendavis]

Title: Staring at the Sun
Rating: R?  NC-17?  Starting with the smut, right out of the gate, here.  :)  
By: Jendavis
Spoilers: None
Pairing: John Sheppard/ Ronon Dex
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: This is all nomelon's fault, because if it wasn't for stumbling upon one of her SN stories, I wouldn't have actually

Comments

[jendavis]

Glad you approve, seeing as how it's all your fault. :D

[rubygirl29]

I'm all melty ... even the snow outside is melty.

"It's nice out here," Ronon says, stretching in the light, and John knows how that sun-warmed skin will feel when he touches it. "Quiet." Sun-warmed Ronon! One of my favorite things to contemplate.

Someday, he'll strip Ronon bare on a mesa somewhere, lay him out on the warm rocks, just that much closer to the sun, and ride his skin all the way down.

That's not just hot... it's scorching. Oh, my.

And TBC? Sometimes my favorite words! Um... this isn't going to turn into an epic, is it?

[jendavis]

*hides stack of printouts behind back* No, why do you ask?

:) I'm hoping to have this done in 5 chapters. There. I said it. Let's see how long it takes me to blow that straight to hell, I'm taking bets as we sepeak. :)

[rubygirl29]

As John says to Todd, "All bets are off." LOL!

[jendavis]

Too true, too true. :)

[gaffsie]

I really liked this, and I can't wait to see what will happen next!

The atmosphere is just right. Everything is slow and sensual and wrong, but not wrong enough to stop or even pause. Very sex-pollen-y. ;)

[jendavis]

Awesome, and thanks!

I'm laughing, right now, because I think this is the first time I've seen the words "sex-pollen" used adjectively. Hmm...wonder what it takes to make it into the OED...

[thedemntdferret]

Oh this is lovely, even with the lazy haze guiding them I love that all through it there is that note of... something off... and yet.

Makes it all the more potent. Looking forward to more of this almost as much as more Ronon/Jayne!

Have I told you lately that I LOVE your writing??

[jendavis]

Hey you! *waves*

Thank you muchly! I'm glad you liked it. I've got the next part *almost* ready to go, but it needs a bit more tweaking. I've been staring at the computer so long my eyes are starting to cross. :)

The Ronon/Jayne story will be coming back, but I'm not starting it until my satedan_grabass entry is complete, even if I am chomping at the bit a little, wanting to get back to it.

[boji]

Having just read chapter one, I can safely say this is shaping up to be very interesting. I'm wondering if latent desire, pheromones are what triggered the sex pollen in both couples, if they had a pervious relationship or if it was just the luck of the draw - i.e. proximity to the plant.

All lovely thoughts to be having over and above the delight that is John/Ronon.

So, how is chapter two coming?

[jendavis]

Oh, we shall see what's going on with the plant, hopefully in the next chapter, which should be along *fairly* soon, probably this weekend. :)