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Man I Used to Be #18

Jan 27, 2010 04:49

Title: Man I Used to Be
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up through 2x07
Pairing: Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Genre: Drama
Warnings: WIP
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: The present's a mess, and the past isn't helping.
A/N: Whew! Okay... Finally hitting the home stretch!

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amazonziti January 27 2010, 13:22:03 UTC

This story is my favorite.

The ending of this chapter was a beautiful release of tension. God bless Sophie.

Is it vindictive of me to relish that Nate really, really did not know what was going on? It happens so rarely that I can't help but enjoy it, even though it's torn up the team some. I have faith, though. Right on for Nate trying to buy flowers, too.

It was undeniably an angsty chapter, but I feel the upswing and I'm excited to see where that goes.

jendavis January 28 2010, 18:21:15 UTC

Thanks dear!

I wouldn't say vindictive, not at all! :) He's only human, even if he *thinks* he's infallible.

I'm really hoping to axe the angst coming up pretty soon, here. Hopefully this will work....*starts scribbling notes*

angelofmercy January 27 2010, 13:59:07 UTC

Glad to see Sophie was still one of the good guys. Enjoyed the chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.

jendavis January 28 2010, 18:21:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you're still liking it!

woman_of_ January 27 2010, 15:50:17 UTC

The danger is over (great plotting BTW, well done, great payouff), but the team is in disarry. Looking forward to more.

jendavis January 28 2010, 18:22:30 UTC

Thanks!

Hopefully I'll be able to put them back together in another chapter or so. :)

dragondie January 27 2010, 17:30:43 UTC

Whew, nice to see everyone back together and safe. <3

jendavis January 28 2010, 18:23:13 UTC

Hee! Yeah, it kind of took longer than I was expecting... :)

oreogeekgirl January 27 2010, 18:54:00 UTC

Whew!

I'm delighted I got to read this on my day off. Thank you for not making Sophie the enemy.

Angst is a good word for this chapter, but they are finally getting it together, ththank goodness. I'll be completely happy when the boys work out their issues and get together.

You've done an excellent job with this fic!

jendavis January 28 2010, 18:24:18 UTC

Thanks!

I actually considered making Sophie the enemy for a while, there, but she's just too damned cool for that. :)