Man I Used to Be #14

[jendavis]

Reposted at the following: I'm seriously hoping this fixes it, cause I'll probably have no computer access for the next day or so. Argh!! Chapter 14

Comments

[fools_game]

There seems to be some... problem. With your HTML.

[jendavis]

Ack! I know, I'm trying to fix it, but...argh. *shakes fists at the LJ gods*

Thanks for the heads up!

[fools_game]

It's cool, I'll just. Y'know. Wait here.

EDIT: Success!

[jendavis]

"YAY," said Jen, who just now discovered what that "disable auto-formatting" ticky box was all about...

[woman_of_]

Oh an eventful chapter, moving along.

Might want to check the post, the formatting seems a little off. No returns showing up, just dense words without paragraphs.

[jendavis]

Thanks for the heads up! Would you mind, terribly, checking it again? I think I have it fixed, as it's appearing okay on my screen, but who knows, I've been having issues all night.

[woman_of_]

Yep, perfect. Just had to reread a few bits that got lost in the lack of formatting. Loved it, and love the thoughts from Eliot and Hardison.

Poor poor Eliot and Hardison!

[jendavis]

Whew. Thanks so much!

Yeah, I'm really not sure how much longer they're going to let me get away with torturing them like this, though they're perfectly welcome to come over here and try to stop me. :)

[tassosss]

PS I love this story so far... and have stayed up way to late reading it, like four hours past my bedtime.

This is seriously good.

[jendavis]

Aw, thanks! Though I apologize for the sleep deprivation ;)

btw- went back in and redid the formatting. Again. And it seemed to hold this time. But thanks for the heads up. :)

[elebridith]

Y'know, if a worm hole would open up in the middle of Cardiff, we would NOT read about it in the papers. Torchwood would dee to that. *lol*
And I was all flaily and wibbly because Alec and Eliot finally seem to go somewhere, and bam! poor Alec gets snatched! And they, whoever they are, want to see Eliot crawl. Oh shit. *bites nails*

[jendavis]

Yeah, well, I figure in Alec's mind, him vs. Torchwood would be one hell of a fight, but he probably thinks he'd win. Long as that pesky tardis didn't show up. :)

Though, who knows. Way things are going for these two, it might not be the worst thing...

[oreogeekgirl]

You do this on purpose don't you? 5 seconds of pleasure and then all this pain!? Gah!

I believe Eliot is going to flip the hell out when he realizes he wasn't stood up. It'd be nice to know for sure.

*hinting that next chapter should be posted now!*

;)

[jendavis]

Yes. It's all unrepentantly deliberate.

And I see your hinting, there. Unfortunately, I probably won't get to get started on the next chapter until Sunday, but. Who knows. Still hoping to have it out before I head out for xmas related family DOOM. :)