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Man I Used to Be #7

Oct 23, 2009 01:20

Title: Man I Used to Be
By: Jendavis
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up through 2x07
Pairing: Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Genre: Drama
Warnings: WIP
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: The present's a mess, and the past isn't helping.
A/N: In the interest of getting this posted, I ran a quick spell check, but didn't do much ( Read more... )

Comments 21

elebridith October 23 2009, 08:28:04 UTC

*stifles a scream* One cliffhanger gone, next one to arrive... *bites nails* You're not gonna make it easy for them, right? Aahh!!
Loved the ferryman/Styx analogy here! Aw, poor Eliot...
*waits nnot-so-patiently for next chapter*
*is sure that there's gonna be a cliffhanger AGAIN*

jendavis October 23 2009, 22:15:32 UTC

*g* Yeah, probably.

This one was accidental, pretty much. i didn't have the time to finish off, so I had to leave it hanging.

But don't worry. I know what I'm doing with the next part, more or less, and it should be comparatively chill. ;)

mulder200 October 23 2009, 13:19:50 UTC

Damn! The cliffhanger of doom!

jendavis October 23 2009, 22:16:04 UTC

:D *sings the doom song*

rubygirl29 October 23 2009, 13:30:41 UTC

Things just seem to go from bad to worse when Papa Nate and Mama Sophie aren't around! I love Alec and Eliot, but your Parker is so dead-on she makes me giggle with happiness.

jendavis October 23 2009, 22:17:43 UTC

Yay!

And you're totally right about Mama and Papa. The others are so totally the other kids in trouble. Parker's the youngest, and Eliot's the oldest, and Hardison's the hyperactive middle kid.

It totally works!

honeyjojames October 23 2009, 13:40:04 UTC

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! Eeeeeeevil cliffhanger! Evil! Gah! OMG, can't wait for the next part!
And poor Eliot! *cuddles him and wraps him in a blanket* At least they got him out of there!

jendavis October 23 2009, 22:19:20 UTC

Hee! Yeah, it seems I just can't help myself with the cliffhangers. :)

Don't worry, though. Should chill out fairly soon.

Probably.

scout_lover October 23 2009, 14:41:00 UTC

NOOOooooooo!!!! *bashes head on desk* You are eeeevilll!!!

Oh, man, poor Eliot! He's just *gone*! I do love his inner monologue, painful as it is. Bless my baby's heart!!

And your Hardison and Parker are fantastic! Hardison as Geek Bond is awesome, and Parker is just, well, she's Parker.

Now, FIX THIS!!!

jendavis October 23 2009, 22:20:46 UTC

Hardison *is* Bond. He just needs the rest of the world to get hip to the fact. X)

But. Yes. On my way to start fixing it. *shuffles back to the writing desk*