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Apr 06, 2009 01:33

Title: Flash of the Blade
Rating: PG
By: Jenda Vis
Spoilers: Up through Reunion
Pairing: Sheppard/Dex
Genre: Drama, WIP
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Sheppard can't figure Ronon out. Or his motives.
A/N: Another WIP. Hopefully the plot won't all fall apart before I get there. :)

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Comments 6

scrollgirl April 6 2009, 14:27:53 UTC

Oh John. I feel so bad for him here -- he seems kind of heartbroken and lost. Ronon is a survivor, and though he's having a really rough time, I trust him to keep going and make it back to Atlantis somehow. I like that Carter would be kind. She's got 10 years of being on a team -- she knows that you don't leave your people behind.

jendavis April 7 2009, 04:43:33 UTC

Yeah, the way I see it, she's familiar with the way these things go, and she seems to be the last one to give up hope. I mean, come on, she was on Daniel's team for a decade, she's pretty used to hanging out with the generally doomed without it getting to her. :)

scout_lover April 6 2009, 16:51:36 UTC

Hmm …

It wasn't home, though, and hopefully, after another hundred and forty days or so, never would be.

Sounds like Ronon's got some kind of plan. Just too bad he didn't, you know, clue anybody else in on it! (*smacks the pretty Satedan*)

And poor John, wandering around all lonely and sad like a li'l lost puppy. Too bad he can't, you know, manage to let Ronon know how he feels about him!

Honestly, these guys just so deserve each other!! Where's Teyla (and her eyebrows) to smack some sense into them?

Oh, yeah, have I mentioned that I'm hooked? ;-)

jendavis April 7 2009, 05:09:27 UTC

Don't worry, Teyla and her eyebrows will be making an appearance soon.

And there will also be smacking of at least one of the boys. Though by smacking, I mean shooting.

scout_lover April 7 2009, 15:42:27 UTC

Oh? (*perks up*) Do tell! Or, wait, better yet, do WRITE!!

jendavis April 8 2009, 07:39:14 UTC

Spoiler alert: It's very likely that they will both be whumped. In one way or another, and soon.

And by soon, I mean, phase one of the whumping will commence in about two minutes, when I post the next chapter. *cues all sorts of suspenseful, doomy music* :)