Right Now

[jendavis]

Title: Right Now
Rating: PG-13
By: Jenda Vis
Spoilers: Up through Broken Ties
Pairing: Sheppard/Dex
Genre: Angst, veering into AU
Warnings: Dubious unbetaed prose
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Right now, things are a mess.
A/N: Just something I almost threw inside IATW that wouldn't leave me alone.

Right Now #1

Comments

[esteefee]

I loved this so much. I loved Ty's character and that Ronon found her again (and STUNNED her! EEE!) and Ronon's sheepish and hesitating and obvious love for her and vice versa, and her acceptance of John and John's fierce protectiveness.

I love how you write the two of them!

[jendavis]

Thank you (again! hee!)

You know what they say about family reunions... It's all fun and games until someone tazers mom...

:)

[esteefee]

Oh, and the line about the currency of parental embarrassment or how you phrased it (much better than I) OMG had me in stitches.

And now I want to write an Outcast Ronon/John MS where Dave embarrasses John with stories....

[jendavis]

HOLY CRAP I WANT TO READ THAT STORY RIGHT NOW!!!

So, you know. You should get on that. When you get the chance.

[esteefee]

HA. I have seen your gauntlet. It's very, very shiny. ::ponders::

I do have most of tomorrow off...

[jendavis]

*tents fingers, Mr. Burns style*

eeexcellent,,,,