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Right Now #3

Mar 19, 2009 01:11

Title: Right Now
Rating: PG-13
By: Jenda Vis
Spoilers: Up through Broken Ties
Pairing: Sheppard/Dex
Genre: Angst, veering into AU
Warnings: Dubious unbetaed prose
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Right now, things are a mess.
A/N: Just something I almost threw inside IATW that wouldn't leave me alone.

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gaffsie March 19 2009, 15:00:30 UTC

That's not all of it, but how he's supposed to add turning into someone who would lie here like this with you, or less than a month ago, I would have killed you just to amuse the wraith, Ronon can't figure. Feels shitty enough just thinking about it.

Oh, Ronon. You're very good at writing Ronon angst. It feels real and painful.

esteefee July 31 2009, 04:43:22 UTC

God, I love the tension of this and Ronon's bravery! I couldn't wait to click onward.

(PS: missed a POV switch divider right here: Ronon shrugs, and it's a little insulting, but he's starting to understand something he'll never ever say to Ronon. Right now, John fucking hates Sateda and I admit I got hopeless confused because all of a sudden I was in John's head. Maybe throw in a --- ?)

jendavis July 31 2009, 04:49:44 UTC

Glad you're liking, and thanks for catching the glitch. Just went ahead and fixed it, and am going to wraithbait to do the same because THEY HAVE TO MATCH DAMMIT. :)

Okay. I've had too much coffee today...

esteefee July 31 2009, 05:21:33 UTC

HAHA. Of course they have to match. You are just like me. ~: (but you still put it one sentence too late...teehee. ::ducks::)

Where are you that you're still up? I'm U.S. Pacific. I'm reading your Flash of the Blade right now and hoping that you've finished it as far as John finding Ronon on old Sanacra. I love the flashback style...it's got me on the edge of my seat.

jendavis July 31 2009, 05:54:49 UTC

Ack! You're totally right! *headdesk*

I work the overnight shift (boring security. I get to walk around once an hour, otherwise, I sit around...and commit acts of fic while on the clock).

Flash of the Blade is totally finished. At least, it better be. I'm in the middle of writing something else at the moment and I can't remember what that one's about. Wait. Right. Yeah, it's done. :)

*goes off to re-repair the dashed line*

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