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Feb 21, 2009 04:43

Title: I Am The Weapon (a.k.a. Miles To Go Before We Sleep Together)
Rating: R for this section. NC-17 for the series.
By: Jenda Vis
Spoilers: Oh, all the way through to the bitter end. Seriously. Pretty much every episode.
Genre: Episode Tags
Warnings: Unbetaed AND it's the first thing (well, er, things) I've ever written of my own free will.
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gaffsie February 21 2009, 11:49:01 UTC

I've been looking forwards to this installment! I love episode tags for Brainstorm that's about John and Ronon rather than McKay, and I knew you'd deliver. This is a lovely look at their vacation.

War of the Worlds?

jendavis February 21 2009, 12:42:54 UTC

glad you like it, and you're tight! *thunderous applause from the peanut gallery* :)

No Fair! rubygirl29 February 21 2009, 13:05:46 UTC

I think there was a definite time advantage here. It's an ungodly time to be awake on a Saturday morning here in EST.

"War of the Worlds." I *am* a librarian.

A very distracted librarian. Oooh, baby! Kind of a "From Here to Eternity" moment there in the sand. And clever, too, knowing that Jason Mamoa is a surfer. I'm dreading the end of this, however. <> I'll have to read it all over again ... and watch the eps to go with.

Re: No Fair! jendavis February 21 2009, 13:13:45 UTC

Awesome. It is late. Or early. It's 7something in the morning and I should go to bed.

I'm torn on the end of it- it's been fun to write, but there's other stuff I want to work on too...

Okay, it's 7:11. that's a good time to crash the heck out.

Also, originally, they were going to listen to 100 years of solitude, but it didn't really fit as well. In my head. Which is tired now. :)

kataren February 23 2009, 14:15:25 UTC

Oooh, I think this may be one of the best ones yet; they've never really had alone time together, right? It's always some kind of emergency or job or people or whatever intruding every now & then. It's like, after about four years, they're finally finally getting to know each other.

You just may have redeemed this show for me. :D

jendavis February 24 2009, 04:04:06 UTC

Thanks! I do what I can.

It was actually really hard not to have some sort emergency- like a drowning or some crisis back in Atlantis that required their attention, just because I got so used to writing around them. *shrug*

It was fun to write, though.

scrollgirl February 23 2009, 17:24:51 UTC

I finally have a John/Ronon icon to use to comment! Woot!

This was gorgeous. I love how you explore John and Ronon's characters and their relationship. And I love the tidbits of information you give us about Satedan culture.

(I guessed War of the Worlds too, even though I've never read the book or heard to the radio broadcast!)

d'awww jendavis February 24 2009, 04:05:57 UTC

Ooh, pretty icon, all cute and cranky looking.

And next time I reference a book, I'm totally coming up with something way harder. You all are far too savvy. ;)

Pester, Pester ... rubygirl29 February 25 2009, 04:32:11 UTC

More, soon, Please!

Re: Pester, Pester ... jendavis February 26 2009, 01:43:09 UTC

XD

Working on it!

Re: Pester, Pester ... rubygirl29 February 26 2009, 23:18:39 UTC

I will do my best to be patient. Sigh ...

Looks like I'll have to hurt Ronon ... Oh, the perils of fanfic writers!

Re: Pester, Pester ... jendavis February 26 2009, 23:58:01 UTC

Just as long as you put him back together again!

Editing now, so the new IATW should be up later this evening.

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