Damaged Goods, Chapter 16/?

[jendavis]

Title: Damaged Goods
Fandom/Pairing: SGA, John Sheppard/Ronon Dex
Rating: PG-13 (will go up in future chapters)
Spoilers: Runner, Vegas
Summary: AU: Ronon's immune to the wraith. Detective John Sheppard doesn't die in the Las Vegas desert. It would probably be easier if the opposites of both were true.
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this

Comments

[gaffsie]

I really love the way you captured Ronon's panic and unease. After everything he's been through, earth would be difficult to deal with.

[jendavis]

Yeah, it's got to be a strange situation for him. I'm confused enough when I leave town to visit my parents. And they're only a few states away! (I spent two hours being horribly lost the first time I went. It was awesome).

[jendavis]

Heh. Credit to rubygirl29 for that one. I was totally stuck and forgot the golden rule of writing: when in doubt, have 'em make out! :D More soonly!

[rubygirl29]

I loved this! Looking at National Geographic to show Ronon Earth and its diversity. Loved how Ronon began interpreting what he saw, and especially loved the kiss. Can't wait to find out wht happens next!

[jendavis]

Thanks hon! And thanks for the advice, earlier, when I was totally stuck with the writing. Makeouts really do make everything better. Think I just needed to be reminded of the, you know, entire point. :D

As for what's next....welll....nah. No spoilers. *evilgrin*

[rubygirl29]

Makeouts keep the characters busy while the author's brain works out the next plot point, and they're darn fun to write! LOL.

I'm waiting, you know ....

[jendavis]

Hopefully soon... The past few weeks have been insane. On the plus side, I got a promotion at work. On the minus side, 50 hour work weeks? Totally kicking my butt. I've barely kept up with my reading, much less all the writing I want to do. *pouts* But next week should open up a little bit.

But not to fear. It'll all come together fairly soon. :)