What Else Would You Have Me Be? #14

[jendavis]

Title: What Else Would You Have Me Be?
Fandom & Pairing: Leverage; Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Some jobs changed the team for the better. Some, for the worse, and San Lorenzo hadn't been the first kind. But maybe it hadn't been the second, either.

Chapter 1

Comments

[jesco0307]

I was sitting on the edge of my chair half of the time while reading this ... I LOVE this chapter.

Yay, for finally finding out who the bad guy is - nicely done! - and for Nate freaking out a little ;). I liked the scene in the car, where Eliot closed the doors.

Double yay for Eliot in action - both driving the car with the wheels shot and going for the shooter. I love it when Eliot saves the day :).

And finally, *sighs delighted*, the boys get it together. Hardison's thoughts while kissing Eliot where just killing me, so funny!

This chapter is awesome!!!

[jendavis]

Yeah. Eliot had to get some of his own back eventually, right? This includes all general badassery and all makeouts with Hardison. :)

Glad you're liking!

[jendavis]

Yeah, I figured I'd be nice and not leave it for the next chapter, as I'd originally planned. :)

[07nathalie]

This is a super cool story! And your writing is just great!

[jendavis]

Aw, thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it!

[mulder200]

The tension in this chapter was intense! And the rescue of Sophie? Talk about edge of your seat excitement!

And Eliot and Hardison kissed! Yes!

[jendavis]

Hee! Yeah, had to finally let them get together. It can't be angst and bullets all the time, after all. :)

[moonchildfic]

I have to say I don't know which part I liked more. Eliot to the rescue! or the resolution (well, halfway resolution at least) of the Eliot/Hardison issues.

All it all great chapter.

[jendavis]

Thank you! I'm not sure myself. Fights are fun, makeouts are awesome. Two happening in one hour, that's pretty much Eliot's ideal date. :)