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jendavis

What Else Would You Have Me Be? Chapter 7

Mar 26, 2011 23:32

Title: What Else Would You Have Me Be?
Fandom & Pairing: Leverage; Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Rating: PG for now, will go up
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.
Summary: Some jobs changed the team for the better. Some, for the worse, and San Lorenzo hadn't been the first kind. But maybe it hadn't been the second, ( Read more... )

leverage, alec hardison/eliot spencer

Comments 10

mulder200 March 27 2011, 05:22:41 UTC

Oh no! Hardison!

jendavis March 27 2011, 22:59:59 UTC

Hee! *is evil*

jesco0307 March 27 2011, 07:48:28 UTC

Channeling my inner Hardison: Seriously, seriously?

Can I be honest? Since nothing ever goes as expected, I kind of thought this might happen. I knew you would come up with some twist that would make everything fall apart again. And of course, now you let us hanging again with the cliffy - evil you ;).

I expect Eliot to be kicking some major ... in the next chapter.

And Parker is a redhead now? I'd like to see that some day ...

jendavis March 27 2011, 23:05:59 UTC

Hee! Good catch, I think you beat me to it! It wasn't until I was halfway through the fight scene that I decided what the fallout would be- this wasn't supposed to happen for another few chapters. Which leads me doing a little re-plotting, but that's half the fun!

Eliot's pissed, he's been bitching at me all day, he definitely wants his piece of the action. ;)

belladhanna March 27 2011, 12:12:28 UTC

Give me a second to get my jaw off the floor. I should have known you would give us another cliffhanger, but this is just cruel.

Eliot is gonna be PISSED!! I want Donovan HURT!!

The team needs to get him outta there now...

ok, rant done...Excellent job. I'm always happy when your work shows up on my flist.

jendavis March 27 2011, 23:07:20 UTC

Thanks dearie! What can I say! Some people write to make people happy, I write cliffhangers to make them angry? ;)

Donovan's going to get his. It's going to be strange, yes, but he'll get what's coming to him.

ebilchickens March 27 2011, 17:07:51 UTC

Yes! Update. Though... ends in cliffhanger. Epic cliffhanger. Awesomely evil cliffhanger. :D Anyway thanks for writing this. Eagerly awaiting next part. Really like how you write the team. Poor Hardison.

jendavis March 27 2011, 23:10:16 UTC

Thanks! So glad you liked!

The next chapter should be up relatively soon, I've already managed a decent amount of headway on it because this one wound up being so short. Though I'm going to have to do a bit of re-plotting since Hardison took the stabbing that was originally going to happen to Eliot, but... so it goes. Stupid boys. :)

Can I rec this? korin12law April 10 2011, 23:08:33 UTC

I am now totally in love with this story. I'm not sure why it took me so long to get around to reading this. But I'm glad I finally did.

I would love to rec this along side of your other wonderful story. If you don't remember me you allowed me to post "Burn" on my site, The GreyLAW Database.

If you're interested please email me at law12.k@gmail.com.

Thanks so much,
LAW

Re: Can I rec this? jendavis April 10 2011, 23:22:03 UTC

Hee! Of course! (see email for longer reply). Thanks dearie! Glad you liked!