My story
I got some pretty good feedback on my personal experience story from you folks and others. I think I would like to submit it to a Non-Fiction short story competition at another site I frequent. However, I know I made some gramatical errors and such.
I know I have lots on my flist that are betas and writers. I also know that many of you are extremely busy. I would consider it an honor if one of you would take a look and help me clean up the piece a bit. I know this is a big favor but this is really my first time attempting a bit of this kind of writing. Thanks.