Fic: I slept with someone in the Wentz clan (And all I got was this hugeass mess about...) - [6/20]

Aug 03, 2008 22:38


 Title: ‘I slept with someone in the Wentz clan (And all I got was this hugeass mess about demons and weird spirits)’ [6/20]
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fanfiction, slash, fanfic: pete/patrick, fanfic: gabe/william, fanfic: brendon/ryan, bandom, fanfic: i slept with sequel, fanfic: jon/spencer

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halighanawfulie August 3 2008, 22:09:21 UTC
My mouth is hanging open. Crap. Your cliffhangers will be the death of me!!!
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So ok, from the beggining :
“She’s beautiful.” Mike smiled, then blinked several times, fighting back tears." AWWWWW :)

The whole thing about baby Patricia was so sweet, so lovely. My heart is exploding from all the love. Cassie is awesome.

Love dthe bit about Tom. It was like, closure, or something. Like he needed to apologize even if it wasnt his fault, so he could feel relieved.

I really liked everything. Things are starting to build up, something really interesting is gonna take place, and Im so excited.
Your author notes always make me even more excited for the following chapter.

:D
xxx

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jen_jm August 10 2008, 20:53:52 UTC
That's what I aim to do. *giggles*

Dad!Mike was one of my favorite things to write. The image was so lovely. *_*

Tom still feels bad about running off then joining the wrong company, and Ryan was the one he still felt the need to apologize to.

Something really really dangerous is right behind the corner, and they're about to find out just how dangerous. *grins*

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jen_jm August 10 2008, 20:54:13 UTC
Thank you so so much! :D
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jen_jm August 10 2008, 20:54:50 UTC
Who knows, maybe he's a ghost, or maybe he's alive. *whistles*
I like her too, she looks nice. :D
Poor Bryce hid behind the couch when he read. LOL But yeah, Dorian Gray is one of my favorite books too, so it was a bit painful to write those things. T_T
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rokeby August 3 2008, 22:18:28 UTC
Whenever I think this fic and you can't surprise me anymore, I'm always wrong.
I love this fic to pieces, it's really an admirable piece of vampirebandomslash. Actually I think this is one of the best, if not .the. best vampirefic I've read ever :)
So yeah. You're awesome ^^

Oh, and by the way, while you're bringing characters back.. You don't see any Ghost!Gerard coming, do you?
I really cried when he died. Yes, I'm lame. Crying when the extremely!bad guy died.. x] But you really can't blame me...He was incredible. Basking in all his..Gerardness.. :D

Forgive me my weak moment there.
Keep up this excellent fic ;]
I do hope Ryan kicks his dads ass, or perhaps Ghost!Gerard Brendon does.
:3

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jen_jm August 10 2008, 20:55:09 UTC
That's good to hear, I always aim to surprise. :D
Awww, that's very very flattering and sweet, thank you! <3333333

Who knows, it might be Gerard. *whistles* Or Mikey, or even Butcher. *grins*
Son't worry, I understand you, it wasn't easy to kill him off like that.

Ryan's father...there might be more surprises on that.
Thanks! <3333333

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peaceypoo August 3 2008, 22:29:07 UTC
*gasp* Oh noes!!!!! .__O NOt evil dad!! Nuuuuuuu!! Won't have it!! Zapp him away right this very moment, thankyouverymuch!!

And why is it always Ryan who gets in trouble all the damn time?? And where's Brendon?? He's supposed to be there and PROTECT Ryan from all the evil in this world!!

SO cute with the name Patricia, lovely. I totally didn't go 'awww' though. *shifty eyes*

I also thought it was very cute with Bill admitting he loved Mikey, even though my liking for Bryce isn't that strong at the moment. But hopefully they will grow with the story. 'Cause he seems to be quite the nice guy. For now, at least; you never know with you and your crazy mind!!

Love it though; it's amazing as ever!! More soon, I hope?? Please?? Pretty, pretty please? Such a good story from such an amazing person with magnificent writingskills. Jealous? Me? Nuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!

Loves, Peace

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jen_jm August 10 2008, 20:55:36 UTC
Teehee, nope, that would be too easy. XD

Don't worry, Ryan can kiss some serious ass now, he's not a kid anymore. *nods*

But it's okay to go "awww". LOL

Bill misses Mikey and he thought a lot about him since his death. *nods* While Bryce...Bryce still has to find his place in the house.

Awww, thank you so much, sweetie. :D <333333
More in a few minutes. ;)
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