Brigit's Flame August Week One

[jellybeanchichi]

Dressed in a shadow
Author: JellybeanChiChi

The following is my first entry in the Brigit's Flame August contest. The prompt was Shadows of Self.

Comments

[csigeekfan]

Absolutely awesome. Absolutely, completely awesome. You did a great job on your story!

[jellybeanchichi]

Wow. Thanks buddy. :-)

[chauncey10]

that blew me away...excellent story!
:) chauncey

[jellybeanchichi]

Hey thanks for reading it. Glad you like it. Doing OK?

[wierdauntie]

This is the best I've read so far. Funny, alive and real. You cringe along with Devin. What a heartless lot of bitches in this piece.. you haven't been done wrong by someone have you?

[jellybeanchichi]

Hey, thanks for reading and offering a nice comment. No, this isn't an autobiographical piece. Sometimes I just like to write bitchy. It's kinda fun! :-)
Thanks again.

[psychrolute]

I really liked how you switch perspectives - from the guy with the shopping cart to Devin to Trudy and back. Nice work. :]

[jellybeanchichi]

Thanks. I appreciate the comments.

[the_panic_light]

Very insightful. Made me think. Excellent!

[jellybeanchichi]

Thinking is good. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment.