Arashi - AU - Voyager 11/12

[jelly_fic]

Title: Voyager
Chapter: 11
Fandom: Arashi
Pairing: ohmiya etc.
Word count: 3598
Notes: i don't exactly know.

earlier chapters:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 10

Comments

[aeslis]

... This is amazing, honestly. The way you apply the senses makes it feel really rich and bright. ♥

And I found it really interesting that he called him Satoshi while he was searching, but Ohno everywhere else.

[starsystems]

thank you~ ♥

I probably had some kind of an idea behind that, like making it more intimate when he needs to pull him back. x3

[aeslis]

Now is that 'probably' because you didn't realize you were doing it? XD

[starsystems]

I can't remember anymore. It was in the first draft that I wrote ages ago and I just kept it in. xD

[aeslis]

kajsdlkfjasdf cute icon.

Well, either way, it's totally sweet and fit really well. (Man, how long have you been writing this?!)

[starsystems]

er, I posted the first part last December...

[aeslis]

Well, I wasn't sure if you'd written parts before that. I have a bad habit of starting to write things and then having them sit around on my drives for um... ages.

At any rate, I'm looking forward to the last chapter. ♥

[starsystems]

I have that same habit. I checked and the doc file for Voyager was made in July 08.

I try to get it written before this fic turns a year old, heh.