thank you, thank you for updating =) this really makes my day better :)love this chapter though i can't believe there's only two more left and it'll be finish...sigh...
you're really one amazing author c",) and i sincerely mean that :D
I honestly can't find words. I don't just want to go 'mmmmsmut' at you but I'm sort of really stuck on the yellow-blue-fireworks-sexomg part. I love the way you describe the bond and the way it pulls on Nino (and Ohno), the way it feels in the back of his head and down his spine. I love that Ohno is worried about his sister and about getting back and about the way the bond becomes permanent. I love that Aiba was gone all day and Jun noticed it and then there was snuggling and AIBA HAS A PLAN.
*clings* I love you forever. I want to move into your brain.
thanks! I was stuck so long on this chapter mostly because of the smut, because it was hard to get to be the way I wanted. (an important part of the story and not just... smut.) :P
AIBA'S PLAN SCARES ME. (Because I haven't written the last chapter yet and it could go... unexpectedly.) XD
I feel your pain; writing smut is awful. I HATE writing sex and it takes ages. You did a glorious job with it, however, and I salute you.
Aiba's Brilliant Plan By: Aiba Masaki, Genius
Stage One: Collect underpants.
Stage Two: ???
Stage Three: Profit! Save Nino, Oh-chan, Jun, and Sho.
Stage Four: Profit!!! THREESOME.*
*Ask Nino if it is possible he can nicely share; if so, upgrade threesome to orgy and have threesome later.
(No, I really can't leave the underpants thing alone. Aiba/Nino's-underpants is my OTHER other OTP. as;dkljfl Oh, Aiba, your brain is a special place and you leave your shame in your drawer at home when you get your underpants out, don't you?)
Would you belive me, if I say that my the most favorite part of this chapter is
"I can feel something..." Ohno said, frowning slightly. "Inside my mind. Is it you?"
and
"Can you feel it too?" Ohno asked. "It's somewhere here," he said, lifting his hand to touch the base of his neck. "It's warm and yellow and sharp."
No, Nino thought, it wasn't. It was blue and soft and pleasantly cool
parts? Just. Really. My heart.
But, truly, I love whole thing, you did it very well, how inside-out of mind everything is, and how this bond is getting stronger throuth whole thing till the point of getting permament.
ah, and
It somehow felt like the air around Ohno was warmer than the rest of the room, in a way that had nothing to do with body heat. Nino melted back against Ohno, shivering and aching and hating the few moments he had had to be without touching him.
guhhhhh (=_=) lovvvvve it. lovvvvvve you. lovvvvvvvvvve this fic.
:D! ♥ (to tell you the truth, that part about their colours is my personal favourite too. xD; )
XD ♥ ♥ I'm sorry it took me few hours longer than it should have because I FELL ASLEEP and slept for three hours in the middle of the day. adflajfldf lol
You are baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! *glomps* Ahhh, I'm glad you found writing fun again. ♥
OhMiya needing each other and the color-coded presence at the back of their heads was.. wow. It makes the whole thing even more magical and fragile and at the same time stark and real. If that makes any sense at all. Then there's AibaJun implied smut. :')
There were no words between them and the feelings were a jumbled mess that didn't make any sense, but Ohno still got it. FAVORITE LINE. *flails*
I wonder what's with the 'sorry' at the end. Hmmm. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Mmmhmm~ ♥
lol, there wasn't even supposed to be that much AibaJun in this fic but Aiba said "Hey! Lets get into bed with Jun! Yay, sex!" and I couldn't deny it from him. ;o;
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This.
This.
Just. This. If I tried I couldn't put into words everything I want to say about it. I'm so glad to see another chapter.
♥♥♥
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I'm so glad I got this written! I kept getting stuck writing the smut. Which is most of this chapter, so. D:
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you're really one amazing author c",) and i sincerely mean that :D
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*clings* I love you forever. I want to move into your brain.
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AIBA'S PLAN SCARES ME. (Because I haven't written the last chapter yet and it could go... unexpectedly.) XD
♥
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Aiba's Brilliant Plan
By: Aiba Masaki, Genius
Stage One: Collect underpants.
Stage Two: ???
Stage Three: Profit! Save Nino, Oh-chan, Jun, and Sho.
Stage Four: Profit!!! THREESOME.*
*Ask Nino if it is possible he can nicely share; if so, upgrade threesome to orgy and have threesome later.
(No, I really can't leave the underpants thing alone. Aiba/Nino's-underpants is my OTHER other OTP. as;dkljfl Oh, Aiba, your brain is a special place and you leave your shame in your drawer at home when you get your underpants out, don't you?)
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"I can feel something..." Ohno said, frowning slightly. "Inside my mind. Is it you?"
and
"Can you feel it too?" Ohno asked. "It's somewhere here," he said, lifting his hand to touch the base of his neck. "It's warm and yellow and sharp."
No, Nino thought, it wasn't. It was blue and soft and pleasantly cool
parts? Just. Really. My heart.
But, truly, I love whole thing, you did it very well, how inside-out of mind everything is, and how this bond is getting stronger throuth whole thing till the point of getting permament.
ah, and
It somehow felt like the air around Ohno was warmer than the rest of the room, in a way that had nothing to do with body heat. Nino melted back against Ohno, shivering and aching and hating the few moments he had had to be without touching him.
guhhhhh (=_=) lovvvvve it. lovvvvvve you. lovvvvvvvvvve this fic.
and only two chapters left :((((
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XD ♥ ♥ I'm sorry it took me few hours longer than it should have because I FELL ASLEEP and slept for three hours in the middle of the day. adflajfldf lol
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Ahhh, I'm glad you found writing fun again. ♥
OhMiya needing each other and the color-coded presence at the back of their heads was.. wow. It makes the whole thing even more magical and fragile and at the same time stark and real. If that makes any sense at all.
Then there's AibaJun implied smut. :')
There were no words between them and the feelings were a jumbled mess that didn't make any sense, but Ohno still got it.
FAVORITE LINE. *flails*
I wonder what's with the 'sorry' at the end. Hmmm. Will be waiting for the next chapter. Mmmhmm~ ♥
Gosh, I am liking your universe A LOT.
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lol, there wasn't even supposed to be that much AibaJun in this fic but Aiba said "Hey! Lets get into bed with Jun! Yay, sex!" and I couldn't deny it from him. ;o;
thank you~ <3
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