Title: Voyager Chapter: 9 Fandom: Arashi Pairing: ohmiya etc. Word count: 3413 Notes: This chapter got a little out of hand during my rewrite. From 1800 words to 3400 words... uh.
This has ro be my favourite chapter yet! Jun and Sho at the beginning, you get the feeling that there is definitely something there, and I'm worried about Sho, with his magic for some reason. Then, Aiba and Jun, that was just, I don't know it was just soft and gentle and teasing, but lovely at the same time. Hehe, and Aiba's comment about Sho and a threesome...that would be hot XD
The Ohmiya...♥♥♥! I loved the way, they ended up natrually so close together, and they ended up in a dream together. If it is Nino's whats happening? Is it just because him and Ohno are so close? So many questions, but it just drags me in even further! But the way you wrote it, I was pretty much a puddle of goo by the end. Nino, stop fighting it already! So brilliant, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing...
hehe, i have a weird thing for sho/aiba/jun. xD maybe because i don't like leaving anyone out and since i can't force ohmiya apart. XDD And Jun has a tendency to turn all mushy for Aiba...
Excuse me a moment, I need to get over all the lovely moments of boy kissing.
Okay. Obviously I love the kissing and, more, I love the way everybody reacts to it. Ohno just goes for it, Nino is DED of embarrassment--and fighting the urge to jump Ohno's bones--Jun is matter-of-fact (good job, Jun! I can't imagine being sane after getting personal with Sho's mouth!) and Sho seems...oblivious and Aiba suggests a threesome. I love you forever, Aiba
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heh, I think Aiba gets it that Jun is a little attracted to Sho and maybe he has some kind of a thing for mages himself. xD; And he wasn't exactly joking with the threesome thing... (omg, now I have to write that omake, don't I? XDD)
You're right, the focus needs to stay on Nino, I just needed to spend some time with the other characters before the final.
Aiba's on a super secret mission! :D (yeah, not that devious.) Unfortunately, no Nino's panties were involved. (another omake?) x3
Threesome! Threesome! Threesome! (Though, I have to say the omake could be nothing but 'and then they had a threesome full of sex and kink and magic' and I would be happy. I'm easy.)
See, and that's what I admire about your writing because this is something that I'd have screwed up, I think. I would have been too tempted to go into the other's heads and I'd have lost the focus but you go just far enough and it's handled with such a deft touch that it works absolutely. I am jealous.
Aiba's super secret mission. LOL
Aiba: *raids Nino's underpants drawer*
Everybody: *is ready to do this huge, untested thing*
Aiba: Nino, I'm wearing your underpants!
Everybody: . . .
Aiba: I thought maybe having sex with you would screw things up so I thought this way would be better. It's to add strenght to our bond! *shows off the band of Nino's underpants* See!
Ohno: ._.
Sho: O_O
Jun: >_Nino: u_u Thanks, Aiba. That will definitely help
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The Ohmiya...♥♥♥! I loved the way, they ended up natrually so close together, and they ended up in a dream together. If it is Nino's whats happening? Is it just because him and Ohno are so close? So many questions, but it just drags me in even further!
But the way you wrote it, I was pretty much a puddle of goo by the end. Nino, stop fighting it already!
So brilliant, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing...
P.s Wait, maybe first? Lol I'm such a geek XP
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Nino is a stubborn bastard. >D
thanks, and yay for first comment! XD
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Poor Aiba must feel so left out. He has barely any screentime (wordtime?) XD
I'm so glad it's at the length it is right now. What happened between 1800 and 3400 words?
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Poor Aiba suffers from my inability to write him. ): But he's still going to get to do something important later.
The first and the third scene happened. that's what. XD; They weren't there before but things needed to get explained.
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hope those mages aren't over doing it.
poor aiba having nothing to contribute. lol. that threesome comment was great btw.
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<3!
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Okay. Obviously I love the kissing and, more, I love the way everybody reacts to it. Ohno just goes for it, Nino is DED of embarrassment--and fighting the urge to jump Ohno's bones--Jun is matter-of-fact (good job, Jun! I can't imagine being sane after getting personal with Sho's mouth!) and Sho seems...oblivious and Aiba suggests a threesome. I love you forever, Aiba ( ... )
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You're right, the focus needs to stay on Nino, I just needed to spend some time with the other characters before the final.
Aiba's on a super secret mission! :D (yeah, not that devious.) Unfortunately, no Nino's panties were involved. (another omake?) x3
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See, and that's what I admire about your writing because this is something that I'd have screwed up, I think. I would have been too tempted to go into the other's heads and I'd have lost the focus but you go just far enough and it's handled with such a deft touch that it works absolutely. I am jealous.
Aiba's super secret mission. LOL
Aiba: *raids Nino's underpants drawer*
Everybody: *is ready to do this huge, untested thing*
Aiba: Nino, I'm wearing your underpants!
Everybody: . . .
Aiba: I thought maybe having sex with you would screw things up so I thought this way would be better. It's to add strenght to our bond! *shows off the band of Nino's underpants* See!
Ohno: ._.
Sho: O_O
Jun: >_Nino: u_u Thanks, Aiba. That will definitely help ( ... )
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And the rest of their lives every time Aiba needs a reason to do something, it'll be "it'll strengthen our bond!" DD:
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