Title: Slow Kisses Fandom: Arashi Pairing: ohno/nino/jun Rating: R Word count: 3105 Notes: Written for i_am_zan in the jthreesome fic exchange. Actually, it really felt like I was writing this for myself. :3
super-long comment, but... Ohno greets him from his spot on the floor, a can of beer in his hand, looking like he belongs there just as much as the stack of game consoles next to the TV or Nino's favourite guitar standing in the corner. Fantastic image.
Nino watching Ohno eat is also great. They're a hovering kind of pair ^__^
he slips effortlessly into Jun's lap, with all the ease and fluid movements of a dancer, and suddenly Jun is warm all over. Mmmmffff. Nice. I like the "Hello," too- very Ohno.
"What?" Jun says, raising an eyebrow. "You think I'm going to give you a blowjob?"
"Since you're already down there..." Nino trails off, smirking.
"In the middle of your kitchen?" Ha! Come on now, Nino. Jun's a classy broad.
I love all this soft, slightly unnerving laughter, Jun's insecurity (and, of course, just enough hot sex)
He wakes Ohno up gently, with slow kisses, and then he pinches Nino's nose closed so that he wakes up sputtering, gasping for air. Aaaand fantastic ending.
This is just the kind of Ohno/Nino/Jun fic I've wanted to read! Thank you for writing it.
Ohno greets him from his spot on the floor, a can of beer in his hand, looking like he belongs there just as much as the stack of game consoles next to the TV or Nino's favourite guitar standing in the corner.
Fantastic image.
Nino watching Ohno eat is also great. They're a hovering kind of pair ^__^
he slips effortlessly into Jun's lap, with all the ease and fluid movements of a dancer, and suddenly Jun is warm all over.
Mmmmffff. Nice. I like the "Hello," too- very Ohno.
"What?" Jun says, raising an eyebrow. "You think I'm going to give you a blowjob?"
"Since you're already down there..." Nino trails off, smirking.
"In the middle of your kitchen?"
Ha! Come on now, Nino. Jun's a classy broad.
I love all this soft, slightly unnerving laughter, Jun's insecurity (and, of course, just enough hot sex)
He wakes Ohno up gently, with slow kisses, and then he pinches Nino's nose closed so that he wakes up sputtering, gasping for air.
Aaaand fantastic ending.
This is just the kind of Ohno/Nino/Jun fic I've wanted to read! Thank you for writing it.
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Heh, that line about Ohno in Nino's living room is my personal favourite. x3;
Jun's a classy broad.
LOL! He wouldn't be able to eat in Nino's kitchen ever again.
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