Fic: Stargazing

Sep 12, 2012 21:15


Title: Stargazing
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lancelot, fluff, fic, merlin, gwen

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aome September 13 2012, 02:29:38 UTC
Awww, what a perfectly adorable ending! Also, I like how you captured their speech patterns.

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jelazakazone September 13 2012, 13:02:23 UTC
Thanks so much! One of things I hope is that I've internalized the characters enough to get their speech, so I'm really glad that seems to come through. Does this mean you've watched more? *is hopeful that we've dragged you into fandom* :D

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aome September 13 2012, 16:30:21 UTC
Sorry, no. ;) I just remember enough of the speech pattern, I guess. Or maybe it's also because, knowing the era Merlin takes place in, the speech pattern you wrote feels "right".

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jelazakazone September 13 2012, 16:31:16 UTC
:D Well then, that's just fine.

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jelazakazone September 13 2012, 13:03:15 UTC
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comment. I remember reading your Yellow Sticky Notes fic last year and loving that too.

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fleete September 13 2012, 20:40:28 UTC
I have never looked at the night time sky

Lancelot, you LIAR. <3 Oh god, he's so adorable when he's trying to flirt. This is so dreadfully, earnestly adorable, just like Gwen/Lancelot.

I will never, never forgive them for killing him off. *sigh*

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jelazakazone September 13 2012, 20:46:35 UTC
Hee hee. Now now. Let's be generous to the guy. Maybe he's just leaving off the with you part;) God, I miss S1 terribly. I am so glad this worked for you. These guys are my OTP from the show.

Oh, so with you there. So with you. *hands you a tissue*

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archaeologist_d September 23 2012, 13:00:20 UTC
That was so sweet. I liked how Lance used the night sky to get her down there and next to him.

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jelazakazone September 23 2012, 13:11:26 UTC
Hee. That Lance. He can be quite the schemer:D Thanks!

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