A grey day

[jelazakazone]

Prompt from the writing community this week is:

I thought for this week we could play with microfics. Write a six word fic. Or a three sentence fic (which if you are like Faulkner could be a lot of words), or a drabble:D

If you want more to think about, consider writing a character you don't normally write. Or a minor character who is overlooked. I

Comments

[jelazakazone]

Nice. You packed a lot in here.

One question: did you mean to say he "tastes the bitter cup of loss" or he "tastes from the bitter cup of loss"? That's such a great image. Very rich drabble.

[jelazakazone]

Ok. You did that thing where the whole stands for the part, or something like that. It is a beautiful image.

[archaeologist_d]

I like your imagery, the bitter cup of loss and edge of a knife. Good job with this.