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jelazakazone

A little fic

Jul 29, 2011 14:50

Title: There is nothing I wouldn't do
Author: jelazakazone
Characters: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Merlin talks about what he does to keep Arthur safe
Word count:265
Rating: G

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Comments 19

universaldogma July 29 2011, 18:55:49 UTC

*_* I. Yes!

That last line! Powerful!

jelazakazone July 29 2011, 18:57:27 UTC

Aw. Thanks!:D

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jelazakazone July 29 2011, 19:34:13 UTC

Oh man. I was terribly nervous about posting this.

Thanks! I was really trying to capture how intense Merlin is about his faith in Arthur and keeping Arthur safe.

There is nothing I wouldn't do joan_waterhouse July 29 2011, 19:28:51 UTC

Oh. That is wonderful. ♥

I love the immediacy the 1st person POV brings to this. Great choice! :)

Re: There is nothing I wouldn't do jelazakazone July 29 2011, 19:33:27 UTC

Aw, thanks:D &<3;

And thank you! It was a little bit of a struggle to do this in 1st POV. I had a hard time with my voice vs Merlin's. I'm glad it came across well:D

princealia July 30 2011, 01:40:37 UTC

Aw, this is lovely ♥

jelazakazone July 30 2011, 04:28:54 UTC

Aw, thanks so much for reading and commenting! I am glad you liked it.

karen9 July 30 2011, 07:35:04 UTC

Moving. You've caught the first person POV well and the last line is powerful.

jelazakazone July 30 2011, 11:50:23 UTC

Thanks so much!