Cake Flavored Ice Cream (It's The Ice-Creamiest!)

[jedi_dachsund]

A couple mini-critiques:

I recently read The Lazarus Effect by Frank Herbert and Bill Ransom

Comments

[daenagtehl]

Ahh, you sounded like Vincent! ahhh!

[jedi_dachsund]

How do you know Vincent doesn't sound like me?

[thisisbliss]

Meuw meuw.

I never heard the word "chiasmus" before, but I understood the comparisson before you explained it, and you explained it quite well, by zee way!

Yeah I felt COOL. But I bet everyone noticed that. Haha.
I can dream!

It just sounds like something I would write in one of my poems. Does that officially make me a poet!?

[jedi_dachsund]

There's no 'official' point at which you become a poet.

When you become one, you might not even know it.

[thisisbliss]

I know. but you know what I mean, bytch.