Fic: Probability

[musamea]

Title: Probability
Author: Musamea
Fandom: Movieverse
Rating: MA
Warnings: Sex. Voyeurism. Combinatorial mathematics.
Disclaimer: Marvel's and Stan Lee's and Fox's. Not mine. The italicized explanation of combinations is Wikipedia's. Also not mine.
Summary: Three can be the loneliest number.
A/N: For the jeannie_x_slim Power of Three challenge. Many

Comments

[onlyonechoice]

Oh wow...

This is the first Charles/Erik stuff I've ever read, and...damn.

This was what made me laugh though:

"Here?" If the whole situation wasn't so absurd, Erik would laugh at the eagerness in Scott's voice.

Perfect :)

More coherence later, after coffee and I've read this a few more times.

[musamea]

Wow, thank you!

And hee, I think we all know that sex-in-or-near-something-that-goes-vroom is totally Scott's kink. *g*

[inathunderstorm]

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Keyboard smash is all I am capable of right now.

::FANGIRLS MADLY::

Good God this was awesome.

::flails::

Coherency later. Must...read...again...!!!!

[musamea]

*very big grin* Yay, you like it! I have to admit I thought of you when writing the third part.

Thanks for the keyboard smashing and the insta!rec!

[inathunderstorm]

Dude, I have such talented writers on my flist, I read y'all and think "I GIVE UP!"

::flails::

Give me MORE of this delicious writing of yours! One day I should beg you nicely to write me Movieverse Magneto/Rogue

[musamea]

Don't you ever give up. We, your fanpeople, are Legion, and we will hunt you down. And make you write more hot Jean/Emma/Scott fic. Hem.

And y'know, one day I might attempt movieverse Magneto/Rogue. After writing Phoenix/Erik smut, I feel like I can tackle anything! *g*

[resolute]

That was great -- I loved the first scene at lot.

I liked the . . . the, the confusion and rightness and joy and sense of acceptance, the way kids just take the worlds their guardians make for them, and take it as the way the world is.

I think . . . yeah, I think that was my favorite bit.

Nicely done.

[musamea]

the way kids just take the worlds their guardians make for them, and take it as the way the world is

Oh, I'm so glad that came through! And I think that's a really nails-head comment... Jean totally ships Charles and Erik, in some sense because they're her guardians more than her parents were or could be. And as a result, I think homosexuality in general fazes Jean a lot less than it does others; for her, it's really just another fact of life.

Thanks!

[lonelywalker]

Oh, I love this - such an interesting take on the prompt. I really feel for the awkwardness-yet-eroticism of the first two parts, which deepens into something truly sinister in the third.

*shiver shiver*

You've motivated me to get the hell on with my story, now ;-)

[musamea]

Yay! More threesome fic! *dances*

I really feel for the awkwardness-yet-eroticism of the first two parts, which deepens into something truly sinister in the third.

Oh good, that's exactly what I was going for. As someone who has accidentally walked in on two people in flagrante delicto, I can attest to accidental voyeurism being an extremely awkward thing. Um, possibly TMI. But you just know Erik's trying to figure out a way to get Charles to wipe that memory from his mind without actually telling Charles what he saw. *smirks*

[penknife]

Oh, oww. This is lovely, and the first two parts are awkward and hot, and then ... just, ouch. *shivers*

[musamea]

*shivers with you* Seriously, I wrote it, sat back, and thought where the hell did that come from? I'm really glad you liked it.