Chocolate Fic for helenmaldon, Part 1

[cupid_johnny]

To: helenmaldon
From: cupid_johnny

Title: Turn Your Heart Around Towards Me
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Kanjiya Shihori; in the background, Matsumoto Jun/Inoue Mao
Rating: NC-17 (Real Talk: it’s 97% PG-13 but you know how it is…)
Summary: Some people had “the one who got away.” Shihori’s experience had differed. She’d been the one to get away, and he hadn’t lifted a finger to

Comments

[helenmaldon]

I love Shihori and Keiko friendship <333

Mao!!!! YAY I LOVE MAO TOO <3 All my favorite ladies are here!!

Oh I love that you're including both Shihori's and Ohno's perspectives!!!

LOL Jun would definitely be the one most stressed about the wedding : )

EEEEEEE just from the little hints of their past relationship I am already DYING!!

"Maybe he got uglier" HAHAHA

I think this is a really interesting rewrite because I already feel like both Shihori and Ohno have qualities of both Anne and Wentworth, the roles aren't quite as clear cut in this version ^^

"She deserved to be happy. He’d wanted that for her since day one." I am already getting stupidly choked up just from that.

"She knew she would, someday. She just needed to be absolutely certain. Absolutely positive they wouldn’t hurt her as badly as he had." MY EMOTIONS.

I LOVE THEM IN THE PAST <3333 OMG JUST GET BACK TOGETHER ALREADY <33333333

OHNO YOU DUM-DUM!!! But also I think this characterization of Ohno is PERFECTION and I can completely understand how that could happen without him really meaning for anything bad to happen. Yes he is so stubborn!!

AIBA <333 Anon-san you're giving me everything I could possibly want in a fic, this is spoiling me *^^*

(ALSO OHNO WATCHING SOAP OPERAS. SUCH A GOOD DETAIL!)

I seriously wanted to cry when he called her "Shii-chan" T.T MY FEELINGS

EEEE this is so heart-pounding in just the way Persuasion is, where the littlest interactions suddenly take on so much significance!!! Ah that was so painful (in an amazing way!) going to read next!!