Chocolate Fic for jadeswallow, Part 1

Mar 14, 2015 21:15

To: jadeswallow
From: cupid_johnny

Title: Under the Same Sky
Pairing: Ninomiya Kazunari/Yoshitaka Yuriko; past Ninomiya Kazunari/Nagasawa Masami; Yoshitaka Yuriko & Nagasawa Masami friendship; references to other pairings
Rating: NC-17
Summary: On the first day of weeks to herself, Yuriko discovers her traveling best friend has offered to let someone stay in their place ( Read more... )

ninomiya kazunari/yoshitaka yuriko, ninomiya kazunari/nagasawa masami, **year: 2015, *rating: nc17

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jadeswallow March 17 2015, 13:00:47 UTC
Ninomiya Kazunari/Yoshitaka Yuriko; past Ninomiya Kazunari/Nagasawa Masami; Yoshitaka Yuriko & Nagasawa Masami friendship
EEEE!! Nino/Yuriko. past!Nino/Masami but girls friendship too! You put too many things from my sign-up post in this fic! XD

Yuriko woke late on purpose, having declined to set an alarm.
I immediately love this first sentence!

Girl roommates and Masami's scientific conference! Smart girls in an apartment, I like!

She was still hung up on someone else.
Ninomiya Kazunari.
Awwww...

...Nino's sparkling eyes and the nimble movements of his hands showing her card tricks...
Poor, poor Toma, but yes, yes, very much to Nino's sparkling puppy eyes. Sorry Toma, your lost.

But you see, I am a special case..
This sounds so much like Nino, just strolling to other people's houses and think that it's okay because it's him and his puppy eyes XD

This... this inn is in need of, um... bananas.
Hahaha. BANANAS. I LOVE YOUR YURIKO. bananas??

I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO QUOTE THE YURIKO/MASAMI CONVERSATION BECAUSE I LOVE EVERY PARTS OF IT. MASAMIIIIIIIII <3333

golden retriever puppy. yes, yes, this metaphor screams aiba-chan.

"I had to give a presentation to the movie execs, you see, to persuade them to give me a couple more weeks to finish this script. Of course it was a foregone conclusion, given my charm, but a slick suit surely doesn't hurt, hm?"
He grinned at her, then twirled demonstratively in his socks, the laden plastic bag in his hand swinging in a wide arc.
I can imagine this part. Gosh, Nino sounds so HUGGABLE here.

"Are those the bananas, then?"
You still care about the banana? Lol

Awww they're calling each other -chan and freezes when touched. sexual tension much? XD

He looked adorable in her apron that said FOOD FOOD FOOD
Eee! Too cute!! Can I order one Nino in the morning, please?

To: Yuriko
From: Masami
Haha, no way!
I LOVE YOU, MAA-CHAN

Nino jumps when Yuriko touches his shoulder! I love this little detail!

She was imagining sliding a leg between both of his
YES. I HEAR YOU. LEGS, HAND, EVERYTHING FOR A GRAB OF NINO.

She didn't know if it was heartbreak, exactly, though...
:'( poor yuriko. it's okay, you'll get him soon.

AAAHH. MENTIONS OF SKY AND STARS FROM THE BALCONY. MOAR OF THE SKY PLEASE. yes to thoughtless moments staring at the sky!!!

I love Yuriko getting drunk before taking the decision (it's from sign-up right? thank you! XD)
I love the relationship between Yuriko and Masami, and Masami's immediate blessing, and Nino calling Masami just right before Yuriko does, and they're so gonna be together now and not saying anything but ~the feelings~ are clear to both of them - thing and going shopping with lounge clothes and the where-should-we-have-our-first-kiss-how-about-here-now conversation and all the affectionate nicknames Nino comes up with (sounds so much like Nino!) and everything that ends this part ♥♥♥

A few other notes:
1. Yuri-nyan & Kazu-nyan SO CUTE
2. Nino still hadn't stopped talking about the audacity of a woman who stopped in the middle of the street to bend over and grope his ankles. hahaha. oh yuriko.
3. Neck kissing. I DIG THAT.

I'm somewhat happy you put their works first before they're jumping at each other. Idk. It seems like a little unimportant detail but this kind of plot really suits me. Plus, THE tension. I know.

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phrenk April 13 2015, 21:00:21 UTC
(Sorry for the super late replies! ♥)

Ahhhh, I was so relieved you liked this, phew phew phewwww. <3<3<3 I put in a whole bunch of things from your signup in my desperate attempt to write something you'd like. :D :D YOU FOUND ME OUT ALL OVER THE PLACE. <3

fjksaldsakjl I'm so glad you enjoy this Yuriko and the Yuriko and Masami friendship! I decided to make all the women who live in that apartment (still technically including Aoi Yuu ♥) be in STEM professions~ <3 (.... If accounting counts as math.... surely it does, right....)

HUGGABLE NINO WAS A HUGE PART OF MY IMAGINING INSPIRATION, SO I'M GLAD THAT CAME THROUGH (HUGGABLY).

ALSO YES AGREED I WOULD LIKE AN APRON-CLAD, BEDHEADED NINO TO COOK ME BREAKFAST EVERY MORNING.

oh hooray, I was worried that my sky stuff wasn't the sky stuff you wanted, so I'm glad that worked for you. :D

You really left me such a lovely and detailed comment on this, only the first part of this fic! Thank you so much, geez. <3<3<3

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