Chocolate Fic for nicefinalbeam

Mar 17, 2014 13:52

To: nicefinalbeam
From: cupid_johnny

Title: In Bloom
Pairing: Ohno Satoshi/Ishihara Satomi
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ohno and Satomi are suddenly married.
A/N: If you’re familiar with the Korean variety TV show, We Got Married, then this fic will instantly make sense to you. I’ve had this idea for the longest time, for the same exact couple! Hope this answers your “Reality ( Read more... )

*rating: pg13, **year: 2014, ohno satoshi/ishihara satomi

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nicefinalbeam March 17 2014, 20:34:32 UTC
OH. MY. GOD.

The perfection of this is unreal. I had no idea what to expect from this whiteday, and I'm glad I had no idea, because this was the best surprise ever!

I do know of the show, only because I watched it once with CNBlue's Jung Yong-hwa and SNSD's Seohyun and was addicted to the two of them as a couple LOL and then never watched it again because I don't really know Korean celebrities but STILL. I know it and the concept is kind of fun and I love that you took it and turned it into this fic.

Your Ohno voice was so, so great. I wish I could write him this way. He didn't come across as too spacey. He's just at ease, except for when he's angry about what happened to Satomi and that's just... guh. Amazing. I love that he took a stand and I love, love, love that Aiba supported him without question. The Arashi moments as a band or even that scene with Ohno & Jun - it was really wonderful. SHO CAREFULLY PICKING OUT THEIR CURRY YES YES YES.

I recognized all the little references to the moments Ohno and Satomi had together with interactions and I thought that was a really nice touch. Their level of comfort around each other was sweet and the build up of the attraction FANTASTIC so that by the time there was a kiss? KILLER.

Dialogue brilliant too. I could pick out many a line. Just know I appreciated this in the full. ♥

Absolutely adored this and will adore it for a long time. Thanks so much, anon!

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natsunonamae March 28 2014, 11:02:49 UTC
Late reply is late but I'm still pretty psyched that I got to write for youuu, Erin! I'm so glad (okay, more relieved, tbh, because this was a such a crazy rush job) that you adored this, love! ♥♥♥

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