Chocolate Fic for kyjr

Mar 16, 2013 12:01

To: kyjr
From: wintersdancer

Title: State of Grace
Pairing: Nishikido Ryo/Mizukawa Asami
Rating: pg
Summary: Ryo and Asami are room mates, and friends. Each Wednesday night is their night, so why does Asami have a date with someone else?
A/N: Dear kyjr, it was a pleasure writing for you, and I really hope you’ll enjoy the fic!

Ryo and Asami are room mates, and friends. Each Wednesday night is their night, so why does Asami have a date with someone else? )

*rating: pg, nishikido ryo/mizukawa asami, **year: 2013

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kyjr March 17 2013, 00:48:28 UTC
OH MY LORDY. I CANNOT LOVE THIS FIC MORE OMG. FIRST: IT'S FREAKING RYO/ASAMI OMG YESSSS AND THEN THERE'S HINAFACE AND I LOVE ME SOME HINAFACE.

freaking university au oh my god--
k so im gonna make a huge fool of myself here because i can and because this fic is AWESOME i just-- /sobs

idk why it's so amusing that junno introduced them but it is - and ryo doesn't think junno has any friends, let alone female friends omg XD

THE WRINKLES THAT APPEAR IN THE CORNER OF HER EYES AND HE HASN'T NOTICED THEM BEFORE BUT HE FINDS THEM 'CHARMING' OH ;~; <3 i love that part ( ... )

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kyjr March 17 2013, 03:26:56 UTC
ALSO I JUST NOTICED THE FUCKING /TITLE/ OH <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

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wintersdancer March 21 2013, 17:50:14 UTC
hdasjkhdaskj I am SO SO SO glad you liked the fic ;_; It was the first time for me writing this pairing and I wasn't sure about what I was writing at all! I had some help from my faithful spy though ;)

I'm really glad you liked it, I was worried that it would have been too cheesy/clichéd, but ♥ Your comment made me super happy, your enthusiasm is very much appreciated ♥

It was a pleasure writing for you ♥

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kaminikaku March 17 2013, 08:25:21 UTC
This was a really lovely fic, I thought the balance between Ryo's exterior of how he was feeling versus his interior realisation was really well done...and the relationship between Ryo and and Asami was sweet and full of potential too! the glimpses of some other K8 members was lovely too Hina and Subaru were clearly great friends. I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing.

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wintersdancer March 21 2013, 17:58:50 UTC
Hello there, thanks a lot for reading :D I'm really glad you liked the fic and took the time to leave a comment ♥

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gomushroom March 17 2013, 15:31:42 UTC
Ohhhhh. This is all sort of wonderful beauty right here! I love that I clicked this because I've never read this pairing and was thinking, what? I've never thought of these two. AND THEN I LOVE THE STORY. I don't read many Ryo stories but this one is just perfect and gorgeous and Asami <3! And somehow I really love your Baru. This was a lovely read.

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wintersdancer March 21 2013, 17:59:29 UTC
Aww, thanks a lot :D I'm glad you gave it a try and liked it, thanks! I just had to put some Subaru in there

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phrenk March 19 2013, 23:06:08 UTC
Oh gosh, friends first romances really hit me in my heart~ Ryo and Asami, fkjdslfkjsalf, YES. And Ryo and his job and his band and his roommate, with whom he falls in love and takes far too long to realize it, fjdkslfdsajkl I love everything. Thank you for sharing! ♥

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wintersdancer March 21 2013, 18:01:15 UTC
Thanks a lot to you for reading and taking the time to leave a comment! I'm really glad you liked the fic :D This was a pairing I wanted to try and this was the right occasion :D

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mayezinha March 20 2013, 07:01:31 UTC
It was a lovely surprise to have this pairing in the exchange!
Also it was lovely to meet the Scarecrow band and how everybody realized everything before Ryo.
I was moved (And wanted to tsukkomi him HARD) by his confession, but only AFTER he got over his speeching inability, he almost ruins it.
Thanks a lot for sharing!!

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wintersdancer March 21 2013, 18:02:21 UTC
This was a pairing I've wanted to write for a while but never got around to, so this exchange looked like the right occasion :3

I couldn't imagine Ryo confessing in a "normal" and "proper" way, so this is the result. Thanks a lot for reading!

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