Chocolate Fic for ryogrande

Mar 12, 2013 21:30

To: ryogrande
From: luna_truths

Title: Twist of the hips
Pairing: Oomasa Aya/Fujigaya Taisuke, Kitayama Hiromitsu/Karina
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Fujigaya has always treated women as objects, using them for nothing more than a quick fling. This time the tables have turned.
A/N: Thanks a lot to my beta and a huge thank you to my secret helper-san.

Twist of the hips )

fujigaya taisuke/oomasa aya, kitayama hiromitsu/karina, **year: 2013, *rating: nc17

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ext_1497137 March 12 2013, 13:56:24 UTC
ANON-SAN. I LOVE YOU. HAVE MY BABIES. YOU ARE MAGICAL--YOU CAN MAKE THIS HAPPEN.

how likely is this entire beginning scene lmao. sad but probably true. you gotta learn somehow, bro.

I SOMEHOW LOVE THAT THERE WAS NO WARNINGS LINE SO THE GENDERSWITCH WAS A COMPLETE SURPRISE.

KITAYAMA. I CANNOT WITH HIM. i love how you picked HIM to keep trying to get into taipi's pant(ie)s, i was practically crying each time he was all "we should have sex." YES, YES THEY SHOULD, BUT TAI-CHAN IS A LADY OKAY. or something. plus she's probably still taller than him, haha.

KARINA. SHE IS SO FABULOUS. i kinda like that you don't know what's up with her and mitsu, though he jumps at her command and yes yes yes. i just love how you wrote her--everyone really, but especially karina, since i don't think i've ever read her in fic before.

AYA. like, i don't know whether taipi just doesn't recognize her, or if this is a universe where he doesn't already know her, but it really doesn't matter because she is magical and I THINK THIS MIGHT BE THE FIRST TIME WHITEDAY HAS EVER HAD FEMMESLASH IN LIKE SIX YEARS OF RUNNING OR WHATEVER. why am i proud of this. BECAUSE GIRL LOVE.

and lol the ending. shut the fuck up and go back to sleep, lmao.

thank you so, so much anon-san, this is what i wanted times eleventy billion. ♥♥♥♥♥

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