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JE-united surprise fic for lady_aenea

Jan 25, 2016 16:33

Gift fic for lady_aenea

Title: Black tea
Pairing: Tetsuya/Tatsuya (Shiritsu Bakaleya koukou)
Rating: R
Warnings: -
Summary: Third year in highschool; Tetsuya and Tatsuya are studying hard for the university exams no one ever thought they'd challenge.
Notes: I've wanted to write a Bakaleya fic ever since it aired but never really got to it, so I'd like to ( Read more... )

p: tetsuya/tatsuya, year: 2016, fandom: juniors, r: r

Comments 11

lunamond January 25 2016, 17:24:35 UTC

Hii,
I read your story. It was soo great.
I liked how they didn't know if they were dating. And the end because of Tatsuyas sentence.
It was soo funny but Tatsuya should have more confidence in him. He can do it!

unmeiboy February 24 2016, 19:54:22 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you liked it :D

mousapelli January 25 2016, 19:11:01 UTC

This was a really sweet, cute fic. I like how there's a balance between the time they spend together and the time they spend with the rest of the group. And how Tatsuya is too slow to realize that Maya and Sayuri are clearly dating but not so slow that he doesn't realize that something is definitely going on between the two of them.

I thought this was really nice! I was surprised to see Bakaleya fic after all this time, but it was a really nice surprise.

unmeiboy February 24 2016, 19:59:48 UTC

Yay! I hoped Tatsuya wasn't being too slow, I'll take that as confirmation that he isn't ♪

And haha, yes, I am fairly late writing Bakaleya fic (who am I kidding, four years), but I'm glad I finally did it. Thank you for reading and commenting!

lady_aenea January 25 2016, 23:32:46 UTC

I HAVEN'T HAD THE TIME YET TO READ THIS BECAUSE OF STUPID IDIOT WORK BUT I SAW THE PAIRING AND I LOVE YOU ALREADY!
GAAAAH
BE PREPARED FOR KEYSMASH
I KEYSMASH A LOT :'D

lady_aenea January 26 2016, 03:55:44 UTC

I SENT WORK TO HELL AND READ IT AND GOSH I LOVE YOU AUTHOR-SAN MARRY ME
<33333 ( ... )

unmeiboy February 24 2016, 20:09:18 UTC

Wow, I'm so happy you liked it! I can't imagine a better response ♥
Plot is normally not really my thing, but if you loved it then I'll allow myself to think I did a good job!

And I hope they weren't out of character! I worked hard on the characterization, but you seem to have no complaints about them so I'll just... assume they're okay ;3

(if I had known you liked Maya/Sayuri that much, I would've written more about them. I ship them hard |D )

Thank you again for the opportunity, this exchange and your request had me writing something I've wanted to write for quite a while (...years).
It was a pleasure to write for you! See you around fandom~
PS. There might be Maya/Sayuri fic too at some point. soon.

su_jin January 26 2016, 14:34:09 UTC

XDDD Awww, omg this is great! I love bakaleya so much! That ending is sooo cute!

Gaaah, I need to go quote all the parts I loved~

"Tetsuya doesn't feel sorry, if anything he's feeling like more" <--- Yessss~~ So much yesss~~ Moreee!

"Tatsuya makes an ugly crying face" <--- Noooo, it's not ugly it's so cute in that younger brother way~ :<

"honestly even I could bet money on that you're dating and I barely have any money to bet.” <--- Aww, Yuuki~~ This is too cute~

Ahhh, there's also entire paragraphs that I like but I can't quote that here! >_< Also anything Maya/Sayuri is awesome! *ships so hard!!* *intense fangirling* Have I told you I love this fic? Because I LOVE this~~~ *fangasms*

unmeiboy February 24 2016, 20:13:22 UTC

Yay, more Bakaleya fans!! Hope you liked the belated fic~ xD

Another Maya/Sayuri shipper, huh. High-five!

Thank you for reading and commenting, makes me really happy to hear you liked it! :D

sky_fish7 January 27 2016, 08:31:34 UTC

This was really cute and it was great to get reminded onto Bakaleya after so long! I really loved that dorama, it was so much fun xD I have to admit I had to look up first who was Tetsuya and who was Tatsuya (because of the similar names lol XD) but I was relieved to see that I got it right haha :D Uhm yeah. However, what I wanted to say, I really loved how those two acted toward each other, Tatsuya being too blind innocent to see what they meant with the dating thing (LOL XD) and I loved to see them trying so hard for their studies! The ending was great, go Tatsuya! XD Don't worry, no matter if you pass or not (and I'm sure you will pass, you worked so hard!!!) Tetsuya will go out with you for sure! :3
Very sweet, thank you very much for writing, anon!

unmeiboy February 24 2016, 20:20:19 UTC

It's been quite a while since Bakaleya happened, huh. But better late than never? xD

So the characters and their interactions were good, yay ♥
Plot isn't my strong side but it seems to have been good enough~
Thank you for reading! :D