JE-united surprise fic for yukitsubute

Feb 10, 2016 22:37

Gift fic for yukitsubute

Title: Five Is Right Out, Right Back To You
Pairing: Aiba Masaki/Matsumoto Jun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: mucho alcohol, (slight) underage drinking, bareback sex.
Summary: Fifteen years, Aiba has created his comfortable space with Jun within Arashi. That night, they looked back on some of their firsts and fights with fondness and happy ( Read more... )

p: aiba masaki/ matsumoto jun, fandom: arashi, year: 2016, r: nc-17

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yukitsubute February 10 2016, 21:42:22 UTC
I just came home from work and saw this, I am super curious to read it, but it's so late already, I will drop by tomorrow <3

Anon-san, that was just PERFECT!!! And Yeahhhhhhhh JunBa <3 When I saw the pairing and the summary I was already like "that's totally what I want to read", and so it was.

I soooo lvoe the mood of this story. The struggle they have with their relationship, and that everything isn't so easy for them, and Aiba's worries....that's all so perfect, because it's not perfect.

Jun is so cute when he tells Aiba that they need to talk more about their problems <3

I love all the cuddling and hugs and kisses they share, that's exactly what I love to read <3 <3 <3

The last scene was sooo incredible cute. Jun coming home, and Aiba standing up, but Jun coils up at Aiba's side of the bed <3 *lol* Why can I imagine that? :D :D

Again, thanks soooo much Anon-san, that story really made my day <3 <3 <3 I am totally bouncy and happy now. <3 <3 I really loved it <3

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gomushroom February 21 2016, 05:40:04 UTC
Hi you! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story, even with its swing-moody tone. You have great prompts (and fairy) so I only had to write this one based on them. Their imperfections and of the up-and-downs of their relationship were so fun to explore, and I truly enjoyed writing Junba this time. Thank you <3!

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64907 February 13 2016, 04:19:13 UTC
Ever since Aiba revealed that in Shabekuri I wanted something that tackled it, but this was so much more and I'm really happy this exists. The progression of their relationship-from confused teenagers wary of the future ahead to the adults who carried the same doubts and fears, just different in magnitude given their success-I am in awe. I like that they're both willing to try and sort things out, and that that didn't happen in a flash but gradually as they got older and became more comfortable with expressing themselves, their wants, their aspirations. I love that this was based on something so simple as a drunken kiss but is presented as something more. Really beautiful, anon, thanks for sharing. :)

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gomushroom February 21 2016, 05:50:26 UTC
Ah, yes, it was originally just something angsty about that drunken kiss, but all the bits from their past were just too delicious to pass up. :) Thank you for the lovely comment <3. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

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te_chan01 February 15 2016, 02:52:11 UTC
This was a great fic to read! Thank youvfor sharing. I enjoyed how it went back and forth between the present and the past. I felt bad for the teo of them and their rough relationship, and am glad it all worked out.

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gomushroom February 21 2016, 05:51:48 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed this one, even if this was a bumpy ride for these two. Thank you for dropping a comment <3!

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