Two rants
First rant.
I've just finished reading a fanfic and I really enjoyed it. The language was good, there were some typos and spelling mistakes but I gladly overlooked them. The story was funny, if not hilarious. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
But the characters. They feel so... shallow. They are not OOC, I believe, but I had the feeling that you could have replaced the characters with any names and it would have worked out. That bothered me. I'm being nitpicky, I know, but I needed to rant about it. :/
Second rant.
THE MULTIPLE CKT UPLOADING POSTS ARE STARTING TO SPAM MY FLIST AGAIN OMGWTFBBQ.
I've just finished reading a fanfic and I really enjoyed it. The language was good, there were some typos and spelling mistakes but I gladly overlooked them. The story was funny, if not hilarious. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
But the characters. They feel so... shallow. They are not OOC, I believe, but I had the feeling that you could have replaced the characters with any names and it would have worked out. That bothered me. I'm being nitpicky, I know, but I needed to rant about it. :/
Second rant.
THE MULTIPLE CKT UPLOADING POSTS ARE STARTING TO SPAM MY FLIST AGAIN OMGWTFBBQ.