Liked it? That doesn't begin to describe. In fact, since the 18th of december I have been in awe of one simple sentence. "Why can't you see me?" See? Now I'm tearing up again. That sentence summed up soooo much, artistically, and personally for me too. I allowed myself to read this a few more times, but since I really do get too emotional afterward, I've stopped. It's enough to know that it's there.
I really don't get like this after reading most fanfics. It's a separate, fake world, right? But that sentence ... was just so powerful.
Anyway, thank you for writing it. You put into words something that I was never able to say. Now I know what it should be.
ok. so this is the part where i squee and flail at you, anon!author, because you make my world shiny. And i love how you alternated Koyashige sections with Nishikato sections, until the end where they come together.
When they were younger Koyama would crawl up to sit on the window ledge in his room when he was upset, his nose flattened against his knee, cheeks wet with tears. Shige would eventually come and sit facing him, their toes brushing together, and after a while he would poke Koyama’s leg with his foot. I’m sorry, he would say, and Koyama would smile
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When Shige opens his eyes Koyama is in his doorway. In three seconds flat his fingers have untangled from Ryo’s hair, he’s pushed Ryo himself a few inches away, and he is frantically trying to button up his shirt, stuttering Koyama’s name nervously
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first of all: I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU DON'T HATE IT. THE ANXIETY HAS BEEN KILLING ME.
the number of firsts: first time writing the pairings. first time writing the characters at any depth. FIRST TIME WRITING A THREESOME, OMG. my first thought when I saw the request was how in the world I would ever manage to get a threesome going since I am a terrible romantic. but I've been dying to write the boys, so I was in a happy happy world. :3 YOU SHOULD REQUEST IT MORE.
when Koyama says 'cat-o' he doesn't say it in an english way. the a is japanese. I realised just now that it might be a little unclear. just, you know, in case you were interested >.>
I am very glad you like the descriptions since sometimes I feel like I don't have enough of them. also, this is the longest comment I have received, ever. YOU MADE MY DAY SPARKLY. ♥
I MADE YOUR DAY SPARKLY? YOU MADE MY DAY SPARKLY. I FEEL LIKE YOU NONCHALANTLY WALKED UP TO ME AND GAVE ME A PRIVATE ISLAND.
seriously, i'm ecstatic. but i know the anxiety feeling. i've got that too the pairings and characters were wonderful. the threesome was wonderful. i will request them more if you promise to write them more.
also, totally interested in the pronunciation. it's what i thought you meant, but still. it's nice to get the details. *lame*
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*sigh of awe*
*tears*
*dies*
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Damn, why can't I write like that????
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thank you very much ♥ glad you like the writing. XD
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I really don't get like this after reading most fanfics. It's a separate, fake world, right? But that sentence ... was just so powerful.
Anyway, thank you for writing it. You put into words something that I was never able to say. Now I know what it should be.
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i bet anamuan LOVED IT.
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i'm afraid that my christmas present for you won't be able to top this. ::cries a little, re-reads fic to feel better::
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YOU MEAN YOU'RE NOT GETTING ME YAMAPI?
yeah. my present for you isn't nearly this awesome either.
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:D I'm really glad you liked it.
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And i love how you alternated Koyashige sections with Nishikato sections, until the end where they come together.
When they were younger Koyama would crawl up to sit on the window ledge in his room when he was upset, his nose flattened against his knee, cheeks wet with tears. Shige would eventually come and sit facing him, their toes brushing together, and after a while he would poke Koyama’s leg with his foot. I’m sorry, he would say, and Koyama would smile ( ... )
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the number of firsts: first time writing the pairings. first time writing the characters at any depth. FIRST TIME WRITING A THREESOME, OMG. my first thought when I saw the request was how in the world I would ever manage to get a threesome going since I am a terrible romantic. but I've been dying to write the boys, so I was in a happy happy world. :3 YOU SHOULD REQUEST IT MORE.
when Koyama says 'cat-o' he doesn't say it in an english way. the a is japanese. I realised just now that it might be a little unclear. just, you know, in case you were interested >.>
I am very glad you like the descriptions since sometimes I feel like I don't have enough of them. also, this is the longest comment I have received, ever. YOU MADE MY DAY SPARKLY. ♥
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seriously, i'm ecstatic. but i know the anxiety feeling. i've got that too
the pairings and characters were wonderful. the threesome was wonderful. i will request them more if you promise to write them more.
also, totally interested in the pronunciation. it's what i thought you meant, but still. it's nice to get the details. *lame*
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