Awwww, this is totally adorable and sweet. I always enjoy a good secret santa fic, and I think you pulled this one off well, especially dealing with the welter of (self-advertised) pairings Kisumai tends to come with.
Thanks! I am glad you liked it. it's true, everyone pairs with almost everyone else and I wanted to get at least a little of the friendship of the more uncommon pairs in there.
Oh god, this was adorable. I LOVE Tama getting help from his mother. Tamamori-san is awesome as usual. Sappy ♥
And it IS cute how they do think so much about the presents. Taipi being an attention whore, yay, and a kitten, awwwwww. And Mitsu having to ask for long jeans, LOL. Of COURSE the salesgirls laugh.
I'm really glad you liked it! I love when Tamamori-san shows up in fic so when I finally wrote all of Kisumai together in one, I couldn't help it; I had to put her in!
I'm so so so so so glad you enjoyed it. I was really excited to get your request because I had been dying for an excuse to write Kisumai and I just needed some direction. I had never written them altogether before, at least not in a full-length fic.
I tried to pack in as much friendship and silliness and fluff as possible because Kisumai is always so ♥♥♥ for each other.
I'm so happy to have written something your really enjoyed.
*glomps some more* <33333333333333333 I want to write some Kisumai now. Oh I know, we should do a drabble exchange/fic exchange amongst ourselves. <3 My brain of course, choose now to go blank from fic ideas, but I can guarantee I can come up with something when I'm extremely bored at work tomorrow. xDD So even if you don't want to, I'll still write you Kisumai. xDDD
Yay! I will happily write you a drabble. Give me a pairing and a picture or a song (preferably with a link in case I don't know it) or something like that for a prompt!!
It was rather nice, I enjoyed reading about Kisumai. It's rather fun how their selling image (at least in fandom) seems to be all nice and kawaii, no matter what they do on stage. =)
The thing I didn't like about your story (don't read if it may make you depresseed; and I only write it because I liked your story and wish you to become even better with your writing) is that it lacked certain tension. The text doesn't seem to hold together, it's falling apart a bit. It was a bit too sappy, I think. A touch of humor would do wonders to it, I believe. =) All imo, of course.
As I am the author of this fic and reveals have been posted, I believe I am within my rights to reply to this comment.
Let me first say that I am glad that you were able to find something 'nice' about my story despite your obvious aversion to its style and content, and of course, I appreciate your readership. My appreciation ends there, however.
In defense of Kis-My-Ft2, let me say that I would consider the way they interact in interviews and on Shounen Club just as much a part of their image as their stage performances and, when it is all taken into account, I do not find that there is much of a gap between the 'nice and kawaii' way they act the majority of the time and the 'nice and kawaii' way they are frequently portrayed in fanfiction. Incidentally, I have also seen portrayals of them in fandom that are just as overtly sexy as they are in stage performances
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Your assertion that the sappiness and humour in this fic has no value is insulting not only to me, the author, but to quinnsan to whose specific tastes the fic was tailored. In fact, your devaluing it is insulting to anyone who does find value in it. It is tantamount to saying that something that other people like is without merit and makes it seem as though their preferences are for something sub-par.
I find it insulting also that you would choose to do such a thing in a community event in which you do not even seem to have participated! Correct me if I'm wrong, but I double-checked the reveals list which contains the names of all the participants and I did not see either aisiguroritsuko or wisnu on the list. I cannot imagine what would possess a person to come into a community in which they did not participate and put down the work of those who did
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I cannot begin to tell you how cute and fluffy and WIN this was. I think my most favorite part was the Senga/Nika/kitten part. :D Seriously though, it was adorable, and funny and SO MUCH FUN to read. Gave me warm fuzzies in all the right places and is a perfect read for the time of year. Thank you. :D
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Great job!
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Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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And it IS cute how they do think so much about the presents. Taipi being an attention whore, yay, and a kitten, awwwwww. And Mitsu having to ask for long jeans, LOL. Of COURSE the salesgirls laugh.
I really enjoyed this. :D
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Thank you for reading and commenting!!
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I can't even pick favorite lines because the entire thing was so damn amazing!~
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I tried to pack in as much friendship and silliness and fluff as possible because Kisumai is always so ♥♥♥ for each other.
I'm so happy to have written something your really enjoyed.
Yay for being friends!!
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The thing I didn't like about your story (don't read if it may make you depresseed; and I only write it because I liked your story and wish you to become even better with your writing) is that it lacked certain tension. The text doesn't seem to hold together, it's falling apart a bit. It was a bit too sappy, I think. A touch of humor would do wonders to it, I believe. =) All imo, of course.
Thank you for the Christmas Kisumai fanfiction!
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THEN WRITE ONE URSELF!
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Let me first say that I am glad that you were able to find something 'nice' about my story despite your obvious aversion to its style and content, and of course, I appreciate your readership. My appreciation ends there, however.
In defense of Kis-My-Ft2, let me say that I would consider the way they interact in interviews and on Shounen Club just as much a part of their image as their stage performances and, when it is all taken into account, I do not find that there is much of a gap between the 'nice and kawaii' way they act the majority of the time and the 'nice and kawaii' way they are frequently portrayed in fanfiction. Incidentally, I have also seen portrayals of them in fandom that are just as overtly sexy as they are in stage performances ( ... )
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I find it insulting also that you would choose to do such a thing in a community event in which you do not even seem to have participated! Correct me if I'm wrong, but I double-checked the reveals list which contains the names of all the participants and I did not see either aisiguroritsuko or wisnu on the list. I cannot imagine what would possess a person to come into a community in which they did not participate and put down the work of those who did ( ... )
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