Gift fic for mousapelli

[santa_johnny]

To: mousapelli
From: blahchiharu

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[procreational]

“Something needs to be done about this,” Hasshi declares. He pulls out the dartboard of MatsuJun’s face he stole from KAT-TUN’s dressing room and slaps a shop photo of Shintaro on it instead. “We have to resist this suppression! Fight fire with fire!”

“Underground, yo.” Kanda cheers.

“We can be spies!” Hasshi adds, “Like James Bond, but more attractive and with better hair, of course.” He flips his bangs in demonstration. “No camouflage, please. That’s just ugly.”
AMAZING from MatsuJun's dartboard picture and spies and secret code names and JUNIOR WARS and yazuka!Shintaro and adorable, adorable Reon and NINJA YABU/SHOON??? And Kisumai oh my God and LOL Geass reference?? and diva!Hasshi and long-suffering!Reon and wise-older-brother!Shoon and just. SO MANY JUNIORS. SO ADORABLE. Honestly, I love this so much. Also, you are fail at being sneaky, anon. I definitely know who this is. Mousapi is so lucky. :( :( But, yes, this is absolutely adorable. ♥♥ THANK YOU. (Even if it isn't mine.)

[procreational]

lol I fail at being ninja, much like Hasshi fails at being leader.

lol I THOUGHT NANI MAI HONEY WOULD BE A GOOD JUNIOR SONG. Are you with me y/y?

[procreational]

You are ninja like Hasshi is smooth and good at picking up college girls. (Aka not at all.)

LOL YOU ARE RIDICULOUS. TRYING TO IMAGINE JRS COSPLAYING GEASS.

But really though, this was so sweet. Love tiny Yamashita! And his girlfriend at school lol. ♥

[procreational]

lol being ninja was not on the requirments.

IDK WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. LELOUCH'S NONEXISTANT ASS LOOKS FINE IN THOSE UNIFORMS.

lol She's.. not his girlfriend, but feel free to fantasize.

[mousapelli]

This fic totally made me grin from beginning to end! So many random cameos! and REON FIC. you are so my hero! Hasshi failing as leader and Shintarou trying to be leader of the jr yakuza, and kisumai playing strip poker! and Shoon and Yabu falling prey to Reon's match-making!

Hasshi's purple hair! And you got so many people in here, it's really cute and funny. Thank you so much!

[mousapelli]

Haha I'm not good about disguising my writing, but I hope you liked it.

[lyto]

HAHAHAHAHAHA You cannot disguise your style.

[lyto]

....and now that I've actually read this......

Awwww♥

but...

...Why so angsty near the end? D: If i had to draw a conflict map for this fic, it'd look like a mountain range.

[lyto]

I TOLD YOU >/

It's not angsty in the end. Only at the Yabu part. There is no need to do a timed writing on the themes and motifs in this fic.

[lyto]

lol I love how you forgot to log out. XD

I said near the end, not in the end XD

Sometimes I think it'd be more interesting to do analysis of fanfics rather than the stuff we actually do in AP Lit :( Stupid Hamlet.

[ayumwu]

I think I am in love with you. I cannot tell you how much this fic WINS, and despite some errors (no worries! It's quite minor) I really really really like Reon and LOL @ Shintaro, LOL, why hasn't Ryutarou realized this and stopping his brother?! You are absolutely amazing and and and SERIOUSLY. Like, Shintaro's posse? FUCKING AMAZING.

And Shoon! We can never end a comment without Shoon. I love him in his brother! mode and his relationship with Yabu alskfja;kdsfja;kfdsj;alsfd *____________* And I actually had a bigger idea of where the juniors are now thanks to your fic, lolololol. .________. XD

I love the fact that Hasshi's a narcissistic bastard and that he still is super immature ♥♥♥♥

And Shintaro's posse. XDDDD I CANNOT STOP LAUGHING.

[ayumwu]

Haha I really need a beta.

lol Ryutaro holds no power over his little brother. His posse is pretty BA too, if I may say so myself.

[lockability]

Fjdofjisof! Oh my god! Such a cute fic! Awesome!