Gift Fic For faded_lace

Dec 18, 2014 22:16

To: faded_lace
From: santa_johnny

Title: Frost
Pairing/Group: Matsushima Sou/Marius Yo
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Notes: Merry Christmas, faded_lace! I really hope you enjoy this. Contains a few Sekuchan references but those have been neatly summed up in this gif set!
Summary: The best kinds of winter dates are the ones that leave you so warm inside that you can't feel the chill ( Read more... )

*year: 2014, matsushima sou/marius yo, *rating: g, *group: sexy zone

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faded_lace December 18 2014, 16:18:18 UTC
Oh my god *____* All the stars in my eyes. This is the cutest thing ever, ahhh, I can't even deal. I love the text messages at the beginning, and how Marius is so straightforward and just barrels on ahead in their relationship even though he likes being taken care of in some situations. It felt amazingly in character, and just like how Marius would act in a relationship… like an extension of the way he behaves towards Sou now. His tone and sense of entitlement blunt honesty while still being really loving and sweet felt perfect to me, especially in the text messages and phone exchange, and the part where Marius takes Sou's hand. It's so incredibly perfect and cute and I love it. ♥

Also the scene where they're cuddling in the snow was so sweet and so perfect. I love the way you captured the atmosphere; it felt very private and intimate while still being fresh… like them, not confident or assured but really earnest and straightforward. The way Marius asked for Sou to kiss him was so cute, and I really loved that whole bit.

And then the end, ahhh, the end, my heart, seriously. The talk of them getting married and Marius changing his name was just the cutest thing, and:
"I'll just keep it for myself, then. I have a lot of names already but Sou-chan's will be my favorite."
"You're my favorite."
This was so cute and sweet and perfectly them in its awkward but honest nature, and I really loved it. I really hope that Sou really will be there for Marius forever ;~~~;

Thank you so much for this really sweet, adorable fic! I love it so much. ♥

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