I just wanna let you know that I love love love your preface, you said “merry joomas” iwefuveifvwef you cute little cupcake please let me squish you T___T
and then your title. Not so grimm. God i'm a sucker for puns and you do it so well here, and then your fic owaufbeofbwoefbwerf YOUR FIC just.
I mean.
ok.
let's get on to it?
It most definitely had not been there yesterday.
I really love how you started your fic, personally i'm an admirer of good fic starters because I could spend ages just thinking of a good fic starter and I love how effortless yours is, because like everything just rolled after that, and a good fic starter for me is something that clicks, something that establishes, and this one, it told so much in just one line, the character, the situation, the emotion of the pov.... you know? Just. This is a genius one. Let me just roll in it
He could feel the tips of his ears turning red, but Nakamaru swallowed before trying again. "The scent of your musky drawers..."
omg this scene where kame just makes nakamaru read the scripts with him like wuevuewf hefuwefbef that poor guy but not a lot f sympathy coz hehehehe things I can make him read if I got to ever make him read anything hahaha
“If you guys hooked up, would Nakamaru still do my laundry for me?”
hi ueda I hear you're an opportunist
good job ueda keep going ueda I support you
why couldn't Kame ask Ueda for help, and why was Ueda unable to do even the most basic of housekeeping?
i'm often between sympathising with him and yelling “DUDE COZ YOU'RE A FUCKNG PUSHOVER THAT'S WHY”
but no I dont mean it because he's my beloved yucchi ;;;
sobs yucchi why are you so perfect
"Nope. You're not... bro enough for that."
I choked on something omg
“Nice suit,” a voice murmured behind him. Nakamaru half-turned, surprised. “I’d say you were almost as well dressed as I am.”
oohhhhhhhh I had tingles along my spine because I CAN HEAR THE SLEAZE in this i'm not even sure why I like it
ok I do.
Maybe
hahaha
His jeans were well-tailored, tight.
ooh thank you for the information I don't need it
maybe I do.
Oops
the burgundy satin button-down he wore made Nakamaru’s mouth go a little dry.
oh
uhm
okay
orz :(
^ that was me picturing and reacting, clearly it didn't treat me well even in my imagination
welcome to my establishment. What do you think?
sleazy XD
"It's a bit ostentatious. Kind of like you are."
and I love this comeback, it's SO HIM
Taguchi nuzzled against his neck, whispering filthy nothings and fervent encouragement,
iawbfisefbuisgb this whole thing is very sexy I just
“Nakamaru Yuichi.” He paused for a moment, and then leaned in for a quick kiss. “And… thank you.”
I burst into GYAAAAAAAA
all your fault :(
this is truly a pretty little thing you've weaved there for me, thank you so much! Like I love that you're comfortable with whatever you're writing, it shows in your words, like my mind's just eased into whatever you're putting here for me, and I appreciate this quality a lot!
Thank you so mch for writing for me! I hope you received a great fic in return, and I can't wait until reveals to shower you with more love *___*
i have a hunch as to who you are......but i'm keeping guesses to myself
secondly, I really love how you started your fic, personally i'm an admirer of good fic starters because I could spend ages just thinking of a good fic starter and I love how effortless yours is, because like everything just rolled after that, and a good fic starter for me is something that clicks, something that establishes, and this one, it told so much in just one line, the character, the situation, the emotion of the pov.... you know? Just. This is a genius one. Let me just roll in it
thank you
so much
just, it's such a compliment to hear that, especially those times when you're not even sure what you are doing, much less who let you on the internet. thank you again <3
idk it just makes me happy that you flailed at me, over drawers and laundry and not being bro enough and sleaze
also i am pretty sure i was completely unsubtle but you know, it happens :3
I just wanna let you know that I love love love your preface, you said “merry joomas” iwefuveifvwef you cute little cupcake please let me squish you T___T
and then your title. Not so grimm. God i'm a sucker for puns and you do it so well here, and then your fic owaufbeofbwoefbwerf YOUR FIC just.
I mean.
ok.
let's get on to it?
It most definitely had not been there yesterday.
I really love how you started your fic, personally i'm an admirer of good fic starters because I could spend ages just thinking of a good fic starter and I love how effortless yours is, because like everything just rolled after that, and a good fic starter for me is something that clicks, something that establishes, and this one, it told so much in just one line, the character, the situation, the emotion of the pov.... you know? Just. This is a genius one. Let me just roll in it
He could feel the tips of his ears turning red, but Nakamaru swallowed before trying again. "The scent of your musky drawers..."
omg this scene where kame just makes nakamaru read the scripts with him like wuevuewf hefuwefbef that poor guy but not a lot f sympathy coz hehehehe things I can make him read if I got to ever make him read anything hahaha
“If you guys hooked up, would Nakamaru still do my laundry for me?”
hi ueda I hear you're an opportunist
good job ueda keep going ueda I support you
why couldn't Kame ask Ueda for help, and why was Ueda unable to do even the most basic of housekeeping?
i'm often between sympathising with him and yelling “DUDE COZ YOU'RE A FUCKNG PUSHOVER THAT'S WHY”
but no I dont mean it because he's my beloved yucchi ;;;
sobs yucchi why are you so perfect
"Nope. You're not... bro enough for that."
I choked on something omg
“Nice suit,” a voice murmured behind him. Nakamaru half-turned, surprised. “I’d say you were almost as well dressed as I am.”
oohhhhhhhh I had tingles along my spine because I CAN HEAR THE SLEAZE in this i'm not even sure why I like it
ok I do.
Maybe
hahaha
His jeans were well-tailored, tight.
ooh thank you for the information I don't need it
maybe I do.
Oops
the burgundy satin button-down he wore made Nakamaru’s mouth go a little dry.
oh
uhm
okay
orz :(
^ that was me picturing and reacting, clearly it didn't treat me well even in my imagination
welcome to my establishment. What do you think?
sleazy XD
"It's a bit ostentatious. Kind of like you are."
and I love this comeback, it's SO HIM
Taguchi nuzzled against his neck, whispering filthy nothings and fervent encouragement,
iawbfisefbuisgb this whole thing is very sexy I just
“Nakamaru Yuichi.” He paused for a moment, and then leaned in for a quick kiss. “And… thank you.”
I burst into GYAAAAAAAA
all your fault :(
this is truly a pretty little thing you've weaved there for me, thank you so much! Like I love that you're comfortable with whatever you're writing, it shows in your words, like my mind's just eased into whatever you're putting here for me, and I appreciate this quality a lot!
Thank you so mch for writing for me! I hope you received a great fic in return, and I can't wait until reveals to shower you with more love *___*
i have a hunch as to who you are......but i'm keeping guesses to myself
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secondly, I really love how you started your fic, personally i'm an admirer of good fic starters because I could spend ages just thinking of a good fic starter and I love how effortless yours is, because like everything just rolled after that, and a good fic starter for me is something that clicks, something that establishes, and this one, it told so much in just one line, the character, the situation, the emotion of the pov.... you know? Just. This is a genius one. Let me just roll in it
thank you
so much
just, it's such a compliment to hear that, especially those times when you're not even sure what you are doing, much less who let you on the internet. thank you again <3
idk it just makes me happy that you flailed at me, over drawers and laundry and not being bro enough and sleaze
also i am pretty sure i was completely unsubtle but you know, it happens :3
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