oh there are so many things i love about this. ryo is just perfect here, with all of his snark. What are you wasting my time for? I am not solving the insignificant problems between you and that idiot this fic is full of quotes of ryo at his best! i love all the details you add in, especially this part: Yamapi invited himself over to complain about Ryo's new irrational behavior. He was in the middle of detailing how Ryo would trip him constantly in the dressing room when Jin was struck by a brilliant idea. “-also keeps muttering that he knows how to have a good time. And glares at me!” that totally made me giggle. i think your word choice throughout the whole piece is awesome. it adds in little details that draw me right in and make it come alive. <3333i love it
THIS IS EVERYTHING I WANTED AND MORE. ♥♥♥ I mean. Look at it! I adore Jin and I love RyoDa, so having them both in this fic is absolutely perfect. And Pin, OH PIN, it's just so perfect and cute and they're so special and alkjjgklfhalk I FAIL AT COHERENCY BUT YES. D: Let's start with some of my favorite parts...
Jin is not stupid. He may not be the brightest kid on the block, but he can put two and two together and get four.
Okay, I know it's the first sentence, but when I read this I seriously squealed because it was just SO JIN - the one I wanted, with him convinced that he's not an idiot! Love! - and I knew I was gonna love it to death. All fic from Jin's POV is great, and this one is no exception.
“Go bother your own band with your classless… idiocy! Instead of disturbing the peace around here!” Ryo bristled, his hands forming into fists at his side. He immediately made a comment about how he couldn’t hear any words, Ueda’s fish lips must have soaked up all the sound. Before Maru or any of KAT-TN could think to do anything,
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ryo is just perfect here, with all of his snark.
What are you wasting my time for? I am not solving the insignificant problems between you and that idiot
this fic is full of quotes of ryo at his best!
i love all the details you add in, especially this part:
Yamapi invited himself over to complain about Ryo's new irrational behavior. He was in the middle of detailing how Ryo would trip him constantly in the dressing room when Jin was struck by a brilliant idea.
“-also keeps muttering that he knows how to have a good time. And glares at me!”
that totally made me giggle.
i think your word choice throughout the whole piece is awesome. it adds in little details that draw me right in and make it come alive.
<3333i love it
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Jin is not stupid. He may not be the brightest kid on the block, but he can put two and two together and get four.
Okay, I know it's the first sentence, but when I read this I seriously squealed because it was just SO JIN - the one I wanted, with him convinced that he's not an idiot! Love! - and I knew I was gonna love it to death. All fic from Jin's POV is great, and this one is no exception.
“Go bother your own band with your classless… idiocy! Instead of disturbing the peace around here!” Ryo bristled, his hands forming into fists at his side. He immediately made a comment about how he couldn’t hear any words, Ueda’s fish lips must have soaked up all the sound. Before Maru or any of KAT-TN could think to do anything, ( ... )
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