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Gift fic for toinkydoink

Dec 22, 2010 17:35

To: toinkydoink
From: tangiblewhimsy

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*year: 2010, *group: arashi, matsumoto jun/sakurai sho, *rating: pg-13

Comments 9

ryogrande December 23 2010, 04:50:05 UTC

i totally love the entire progression of this fic. it helps that sho in the first section is totally me. xD i set my alarm early and purposely don't program my coffee maker and have a morning routine. i also liked the little details about the soap and the transition into the bicycle. i like how there was hardly any dialogue and you could still tell that they were accepting each other. a very nice read.

katmillia December 23 2010, 05:24:34 UTC

NEIGHBORS AU MY GOD MY WEAKNESS LET ME SHOW YOU IT

Unf, I loved this. I loved how Sho was just Sho and Jun was all bluster and temper and wit, and how they meshed but didn't mesh at the same time. It was really just a perfect succession of them being them, and at the same time being them in the together sense. I loved this! ♥

toinkydoink December 23 2010, 05:50:05 UTC

jdslka;jdlsa uwaaaah! you should've seen my face when I saw I got Sakumoto for holiday! (...on second thought, maybe not. It might have been a little scary-looking. >_>)

But okay, semi-coherency time: This is so, so adorable! I love love love the beginning~ I can totally relate to setting one's alarm clock 15 minutes early--lazy/indulgent mornings ftw! And then there's Sho. Waaah, with his mornings and stolen hotel soaps and his tendency to get carried away with writing that note that it ended up being an essay. And Jun, ohmygod, do I see a messy Jun? Maybe it's just me, but it is so, so rare to see messy!Jun in fics when that's how he actually is. *a* Eeeeee, I love love love. ♥

MORE HALF-COHERENT THINGS: When Sho started going door-to-door to look for Jun's bike, ohmygod and how that started something so, so beautiful to the point that it makes Sho all dorky with two pairs of chopsticks in his mouth and JUN'S REACTION. Guuuuh, Anon! Your Sho and Jun are so, so adorable I just-- HEARTS IN MY EYES, ANON. SO. MUCH. LOVE ( ... )

r_1_ss_a December 23 2010, 19:08:16 UTC

awwww, sakumoto. <3 i sound like a broken record but the more i read these two, the more i love them.

this was so sweet. i like how sho had a routine and it all comes crashing down because of jun. i like stories like that. that IT was developed. :)

i specifically loved the part when sho was waiting for him and here comes jun and jun just lets him IN.

thanks for writing and sharing!

astrangerenters December 24 2010, 16:07:34 UTC

Echoing what others have said - I love how their relationship progressed from antagonism/irritation into more respect and understanding. And I liked that neither of them really changed THAT much. Sho and Jun have very strong personalities to begin with, so if they changed it wouldn't have really been them. This was a lovely read!