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Prompt 3: Change Your Stars - Team AU

Dec 08, 2008 12:31

Title: Change Your Stars
Rating: PG
Summary: We struggle through life, pushed around and ignored. Yamapi has always struggled through life to achieve his dream of becoming a music producer. Kame has always struggled to be heard, unable to deal with not taken seriously. He lashes out at the new intern. They struggle with their feelings towards ( Read more... )

team: au, round 1: prompt 03, character: yamapi

Comments 1

letitbegin December 9 2008, 04:51:16 UTC

I thought that this was a wonderful story! You did a really good job of portraying Kame's internal struggle and you led up to his eventual connection with Yamapi very well. I like Ryo and thought that his relationship to Ueda was particularly funny for the irony. The fact that Kame's revelations were discovered through his drunkenness was totally realistic and charming. Great job!