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Prompt 2: Brighter than Lightning - Team What If

Dec 03, 2008 21:16

Title: Brighter than Lightning
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Akame
Summary: And yet, when he looks back on the first time he met Kame, in a dingy rehearsal room, hung-over and exhausted, he thinks that maybe it isn’t the worst thing in the world.
Prompt: Tackey and Tsubasa-Venus,
Warnings: Mushiness, language
Notes: This is based on the idea, what-if ( Read more... )

pairing: akame, round 1: prompt 02, team: what if

Comments 13

luciene December 4 2008, 09:10:46 UTC

I loved this, so so much. The mood is soft and slow, nothing is rushed, and yet the story moves on and includes only the most relevant parts. Thank you for this.

gingifere January 8 2009, 15:11:48 UTC

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm so pleased you liked this. I'm particularly pleased you mentioned the pace and only including the most relevant parts, as I know that I felt like I failed in parts to get across exactly what I meant...But I'm glad you liked this ♥♥♥

solo December 4 2008, 12:55:10 UTC

I really enjoyed the mood in this. And also all the little details like Koki's hair, Maru, and 'JJKTY'. And the labeled water! :-)

gingifere January 8 2009, 15:13:57 UTC

Thank you so much! This comment meant a lot to me because you and k_julia have become my favourite authors in this fandom right now ♥ Ahh, Koki's hair was so much fun to come up with! I love the idea of him changing hair colours every season. And ahhh Maru, how I adore torturing you! ♥♥

solo January 9 2009, 17:56:02 UTC

::blushes:: I'm all embarrassed now. Thank you, that's an incredible compliment.

Maru... I have no words for Maru sometimes. But I like the way you brought out the fact that he's fundamentally a decent guy who cares about the others -- and is annoying with it at the same time! *g*

kirei_shinigami December 8 2008, 13:18:35 UTC

this is such a cute fic.
loved it!

gingifere January 8 2009, 15:14:28 UTC

Thank you! I'm pleased you enjoyed it :) ♥

akillarian December 15 2008, 03:46:13 UTC

It's cute. I like the Jin in this fic.

gingifere January 8 2009, 15:14:50 UTC

Thank you! I liked writing this Jin too :D ♥♥

misao_duo December 15 2008, 13:00:12 UTC

I really wish this one would be longer :)
It's pretty adorable as it is right now but it would be pretty nice to know more about what happened between the lines.
Either way, I still loved Kame (and his professional ways, of course) in this, and how it's filled with little details like labeled water and 'JJKTY' :P

gingifere January 8 2009, 15:19:07 UTC

I do as well. I think if I'd had more time, or if I hadn't had to write this in an a hysterical pinch hit enduced panic, it would have been longer because I would have liked to explore more of their dynamics, how Kame felt etc etc.

I'm glad you liked the Kame and the little details :) ♥♥