Team Future, prompt 2: I am an elite person.

[game_referee]

Title: Crooked Road
Pairing/Group: NEWS; Gen.
Rating: G
Warnings: Minor angst concerning the break-up of NEWS.
Summary: As Shige’s high school reunion approaches, he looks back at his life and wonders what kind of person he has become.

Comments

[alternatejess]

I was a cheater mod and read this just before it was posted #getsbricked.

Anyway, I really liked how you dealt with the "news breakup" . I liked that in the end everyone was happy and there were no bad feelings that lingered. The ending bit where Shige went back to Aoyama was extremely heartwarming . love how Shige reconciled with himself and learnt to be satisfied . There was something very quietly beautiful about it :) Thanks for a good read!

[lastingdreams8]

Thanks so much for your comment!
I'm glad the Aoyama bit worked well :)

[wintersdancer]

I really liked how relaxed the atmosphere was between them, just catching up on daily lives :D

[lastingdreams8]

Thank you! I was trying to imagine them outside their idol lives as just chilling, haha :)

[mayezinha]

I liked how the NEWS bond didn't fade even when they aren't together anymore.

Also that Shige's reflective tone didn't come bitter or self deprecating, there wasn't this feeling of worthlessness and self-doubt that most of the time Shige has.

Interesting fic, thanks a lot for sharing!

[lastingdreams8]

Thanks for the comment :)
I hope that Shige, now or in the future, doesn't think so lowly of himself <3

[jtriskell]

[lastingdreams8]

Thanks for reading :)

[sashjun]

I like d the calm atmosphere of this, like ... the way it makes Shige realise life is satisfying ♥

[lastingdreams8]

Late reply is late- thank you for reading! :)