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Prompt 5: Break ups are good for the soul - Team Present

Aug 06, 2010 20:23

Title: Don’t Say I Didn’t Try
Rating: R
Pairing: Akame, Pin
Summary: In which there is a break up, and Kame moves on.
Prompt: Break ups are good for the soul
Warnings: Swearing, ridiculous amounts of angst, potential personal feelings coming through regarding the whole “Jin leaving KAT-TUN” issue.
Notes: Much love to N for the beta and to S ( Read more... )

round 2: prompt 05, team: present

Comments 2

still_ciircee August 7 2010, 14:54:48 UTC

I love that Kame hits delete. I really like the way Kame is so hurt but also so resigned, that he's angry but not out of control in anyway. Things are surprsing, but not. I think this fic was really, really well done and thoughtful.

kaminikaku August 14 2010, 13:28:18 UTC

That was beautifully done - the anger and betrayal and disappointment was there; you could see and feel it in Kame. The way Jin tries to call him, but Pi goes to see him made my heart ache. I like that Kame is not broken - he is too strong and too centred to allow this to destroy him, but it will take a lot for this to be fixed or even changed into something close enough to bearable. (And because I am a total akame tragic I am going to choose that it's ok Kame hits delete because it's a prompt about breaking up...and when Jin calls him in another 5 minutes he will have the number again).