Comments | je_ficgames: Prompt 4: One day you’re in and the next you’re out

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Prompt 4: One day you’re in and the next you’re out - Team Future

Aug 05, 2010 14:55

Title: Grounds of challenge
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Shige-centric, Ryo/Shige
Summary: Boy bands with “boys” in their thirties are difficult to market these days. The analysis says NEWS will be better off as individuals at this point in their carriers. Shige finds himself in a dubious situation.
Prompt: "One day you're in and the next you're out ( Read more... )

team: future, round 2: prompt 04

Comments 10

darlita August 5 2010, 14:35:44 UTC

SHIGE'S LIFE.

This was really awesome ♥

sashjun August 24 2010, 08:35:24 UTC

. . . IS HARD?

he is awesome for working hard, right?

thank you for reading, commenting and thinking it was awesome ♥

zheinpathos August 5 2010, 16:59:59 UTC

Of course he chose to go back to school. XD Good for Shige!

This was awesome! :D

sashjun August 24 2010, 08:36:07 UTC

I´m glad he managed it ;D

thank you ♥ ♥ ♥

still_ciircee August 7 2010, 05:53:27 UTC

This was a great story! I love how Shige sort of gets the short end of the stick and yet somehow inspires Ryo to work even harder. I love that things are not easy for him, that he struggles, and that he will KEEP struggling. That felt very true-to-life to me. I love that the others don't abandon him, that things are a little awkward but not fraught with tension. Well done!

sashjun August 24 2010, 08:38:39 UTC

YAY! I felt like receiving some official praise with the well done at the end of your comment ♥ especially because of what you said ♥ hearing that if felt "true-to-life", that it was the struggle that was believable made me really happy at the time. SO THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH for reading and leaving me an awesome feedback!

mayezinha August 13 2010, 00:22:20 UTC

I was a bit dubiou on the first but reading how Shige stood up to the situation with Ryo's support won me.

A great job, thank for sharing!

sashjun August 24 2010, 08:39:29 UTC

Thank you for keeping on reading despite the doubt <3

and thank you for reading and commenting!

goldfreckled August 14 2010, 20:03:57 UTC

Ah~ this fic made me want to hug Shige so much! D:

It's fascinating how you based this story on the negative maybes in life, I don't really think I've read that before (though then again, that might be just my preferences XD) and even though I got all depressed somewhere in the middle, the gorgeous RyoShige made me very happy in the end. *_____*

sashjun August 24 2010, 08:41:35 UTC

I never know if I can elude some emotions out of the readers so thank you for telling me ♥ I am pretty sure Shig would kill for a hug at times in this story.
Eh, sorry for making you depressed <3 and thanks for reading and you know leaving me awesome comment and making me super happy *__*