Not even going to bother going anoncrumplelushApril 8 2013, 01:11:01 UTC
OP here.
Oh. My. Gawd!!
This is just amazing. You managed to squeeze so many of my kinks into one fic. Considering my request only had one listed I am seriously wondering how you did that? Are you psychic? You must be.
I love how Shige won't go over without calling in case he sees something he doesn't want to. Immediately I thought that they weren't together, but then when Ryo shows up they're just so intimate with each other. With Shige washing Ryo and Ryo being all tired and letting Shige look after him. Guh. My brain is dead.
And then Ryo is all wanting but too tired to think and doesn't even know what to ask for, and Shige just *takes charge* and Ryo thinks it feels wrong, but so good and he just wants more. Fantastic!
I love how Shige won't let Ryo come until he's ready and how Ryo is ready to come without even being touched but waits because he's told to. Good boy Ryo.
And then! And then Ryo sort-of confesses to Shige, in that there's no one else and he just wants him, and Shige finally sees it and they've basically just gotten together, but without any smoosy, overly romantic crap. That is just so like them!
So lets see. You basically managed to write an established, getting-together fic (how is that even possible?) with rimming, orgasm denial, Shige being insecure, Shige being in control, Ryo being M and a bath scene. You are amazing and I think I love you.
(Just noticed that you said you haven't written them for very long. Seriously, you should write them always as you are clearly very good at it.)
Re: Not even going to bother going anonsashjunApril 22 2013, 18:03:42 UTC
♥ First of all, sorry for all the typos and such, I really shouldn't post late at night.
Anyway thank you for liking this despite all its flaws. I don't know where all the background came from, but you even mentioned the things like their relationship and stuff that really made me like writing this so, really I was so happy when I saw your comment. Thank you again.
Oh. My. Gawd!!
This is just amazing. You managed to squeeze so many of my kinks into one fic. Considering my request only had one listed I am seriously wondering how you did that? Are you psychic? You must be.
I love how Shige won't go over without calling in case he sees something he doesn't want to. Immediately I thought that they weren't together, but then when Ryo shows up they're just so intimate with each other. With Shige washing Ryo and Ryo being all tired and letting Shige look after him. Guh. My brain is dead.
And then Ryo is all wanting but too tired to think and doesn't even know what to ask for, and Shige just *takes charge* and Ryo thinks it feels wrong, but so good and he just wants more. Fantastic!
I love how Shige won't let Ryo come until he's ready and how Ryo is ready to come without even being touched but waits because he's told to. Good boy Ryo.
And then! And then Ryo sort-of confesses to Shige, in that there's no one else and he just wants him, and Shige finally sees it and they've basically just gotten together, but without any smoosy, overly romantic crap. That is just so like them!
So lets see. You basically managed to write an established, getting-together fic (how is that even possible?) with rimming, orgasm denial, Shige being insecure, Shige being in control, Ryo being M and a bath scene. You are amazing and I think I love you.
(Just noticed that you said you haven't written them for very long. Seriously, you should write them always as you are clearly very good at it.)
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Anyway thank you for liking this despite all its flaws. I don't know where all the background came from, but you even mentioned the things like their relationship and stuff that really made me like writing this so, really I was so happy when I saw your comment. Thank you again.
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