Poem time!

Dec 02, 2004 07:07

*ahem*

Your deep, lovely eyes, your golden locks of hair
Yours is a beauty with which none others can compare
This might be a dream
That's how it would seem
But this is something that is near and sincere to me
Beauty divine, these feelings of mine for you
Are genuine and true
And so I ask you, Emmalie Vance-
Would you be my date for the winter dance?

Yeah, that's how I'm going to ask her out. Any input/suggestions/critiquing?
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