The Homewrecker Chapter 5

[jcrgirl]

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[emeraldheiress]

Ha! First! ;)

[jcrgirl]

I had to add a few lines. I forgot about the dog! Figured the ASPCA would be after me if I let him get burned up in the fire :)

[emeraldheiress]

Hell, /I/ forgot about the damned dog. o.o and that's my JOB to catch that stuff.

Finished my next reread and the only thing I noticed were a couple of missing non-essential commas. Nothing glaring lol Sorry about missing those, too. -sheepish look- I'm just not on my game tonight, I guess.

[jcrgirl]

I think I can handle a few dropped commas! Flipping dog! I was on my way home tonight and actually facepalmed myself - You killed Angus, you dumb bunny!

He's safe now. Sarah McLoughlin, Willie Nelson, the ASPCA and PETA should all be happy

[glimmerella]

Awesome chapter!!

[glimmerella]

P.S. If you ever want a beta, hit me up.

melzie_m@hotmail.com

[jcrgirl]

Thanks!

[sandycub]

Yeah! Another post!! Well you caught me by surprise, I thought it was going to be Dennis! Excellent writing! Yeah for Casey calling and alerting Dean to trouble! Even though it's Sam and Dean's story I like Casey to be in there sometimes, not forgotten about. Yes! Bobby showed up but boy is Dean going to kick his ass for leaving Sam alone with Joey! And where are Brandon and Joey now???

Thanks for saving Angus!

[jcrgirl]

Oh yeah...Poor Bobby. He just wanted a little nookie :)

Casey will never be written out completely. She'll always be Joey's mom. She'll only be a guest character though.

Thanks for reading!

[dont_hate_me01]

So what is Brandon's plan, is he trying to frame Mike, or is there something else you're hiding from us?

Yes, I know I'm behind in reading this fic, but I'll catch up. Let me be off!

[jcrgirl]

I see that you've caught up so I can say this...

I read the first line of this comment and I stopped for a second and thought "Didn't I kill Brandon off? Oh God, did I forget that part?"

Glad you've caught up!!!