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Out of Choices - Chapter 15

Jan 21, 2009 19:47

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 15: Rubicon (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count: 4,804
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to move to the town of Forks, Washington and decides that alone is the best way to be. She ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 18

nautica7mk January 22 2009, 01:36:32 UTC

Okay, that was ridiculously hot. I'd never look at biology the same way again. It almost makes me want to take up a science course when I go back to college. Whew!

jcaddict January 22 2009, 18:05:21 UTC

I think Edward can make anything hot LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

dawntwilight000 January 22 2009, 02:00:12 UTC

Holy crap! Loved Bella's thoughts in the begining of the chapter. The banter with Alice was great. Thank you for the biology lesson. We will all think of it in a new light. Edward whispering into her ear! Christ, that would kill a girl! The kiss at the end..HOLY CRAP!
Great story! You really should consider putting the story on Twilighted.net. I was going to nominate you for the Twilight awards, but they had closed them. Sorry! Next time I will! Thanks for taking the time to give us this great story!

jcaddict January 22 2009, 18:09:13 UTC

Awww you're so sweet. Thank you for the thought. It was wonderful of you. I am thinking about putting it up at Twilighted.net, on your advice mind you :) You've gotta love a review that starts with holy crap! (My thoughts so often start there!) I dare say Edward whispering in my ear would kill me LMAO. And thank you for always leaving such great reviews. You never fail to bring a smile to my face and make me feel great!

infinitegraces January 22 2009, 05:52:23 UTC

Oh, wow. Due to my major in college, and the varying selection for science classes to take to fulfill my general education component, I haven't had Bio since high school...but that was amazing.

I bet Edward really was actually capable of giving a girl an orgasm just by speaking. The thought of him talking dirty combined with his perfectly sexy voice made me shudder.

Any chance of actually letting him do that to her? Y'know, the whole nine yards and all that?

jcaddict January 22 2009, 18:17:18 UTC

Initially I wasn't thinking of going in that direction but as soon as I typed that line in the story my head went "Arc?" **snorts** It would be seriously hot! We'll have to see. I love your icon. That was one of my most favourite parts of the movie!

vampire_skies January 22 2009, 20:27:38 UTC

Whoah! This chapter is HOT. That had to be the most entertaining bio class I've ever witnessed! Thanks for writing intelligent fanfics! ;)

jcaddict February 5 2009, 18:52:53 UTC

Aww, thank you, and you're welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

tainted_jojo January 24 2009, 06:45:17 UTC

I just recently starting read your story and I love it ( ... )

jcaddict February 5 2009, 19:02:49 UTC

Wow. Thank you...I don't even know what to say.

I agree with you that Edward's carefree nature is lost in Twilight and I prefer to see Edward's angst aimed inward. I wanted to show him trying but being unable to entirely control things between he and Bella, and the constant sexual references are him adapting to the environment, going with what works because he's kind of desperate to get at her.

I like UST, as long as I'm not involved that is LOL.

Thank you for the recommendation. Someone did start a thread over at Twilighted.net for the story. Is that what you mean or do you mean actually posting the story there?

Oh, and thank you again. I loved hearing your thoughts and I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review the story!