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Nov 29, 2005 08:46

I am writing a really good song. I wanted to post it so here it is

"Trapped inside a body
Trapped inside an expectation of perfection
Trapped inside a reputation
Trapped inside a Fortress of Self

Spinning round and round
Till you cant find a way out
Screaming out for a place
A place where you can be safe

This fortress holds me together
All that keeps me here
All that protects me
All that holds me captive

Build who you are
On what you believe
An expectation or reputation
Are not not who you are

(Bridge) Sittin on the floor
Screaming at defeat
Tired of this war against yourself
Soar above eagles
With a clarity
A knowledge of safety

I wrote this this week. I write my music form my heart, and it probably reflects the most inner me. This song sums me up I think. It shows a humanity and a fear. These are not things I portray about myself well. I would like to know what you guys think... honestly... some feedback please?
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