CAN SOMEBODY PLEASE
edit, proofread this?
its for a website, but in my opinion, it's sort of wordy, and i was wondering if anyone had any suggestions ?
add something, delete something, take out commas, periods, whatever it is, even changing the WHOLE thing, make it more interesting but at the same time professional...
id love your help
:-)
thank you ahead of time
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NGVI blends the company’s imagination and solid engineering practices to cultivate the world’s best integrated technologies of the NGV field. Lobbying to establish laws, regulations, and standards for safety as well as developing private sector funding through banking and financing industries, NGVI stays active towards the growth of the already blossoming natural gas markets. The company also explores and nurtures new avenues for government subsidies to expand these natural gas markets. Seizing every opportunity for growth is essential for NGVI to be able to serve society’s constituents and share the environmental, economical benefits of NGVs.
NGVI established a “NGV R&D Center,” the only R&D center in the world solely dedicated to NGV technology. This research and development team of NGVI is making continuous, significant investments to promote natural gas vehicles, low-emission industrial engines (for fork-lifts, electrical generator sets, aerial work platforms, etc.) and to develop bio-gas for use as a vehicle fuel. The team promises a future of clean natural gas to supply to industries and homes and exerts the utmost effort towards the commitment.
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its for a website, but in my opinion, it's sort of wordy, and i was wondering if anyone had any suggestions ?
add something, delete something, take out commas, periods, whatever it is, even changing the WHOLE thing, make it more interesting but at the same time professional...
id love your help
:-)
thank you ahead of time
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NGVI blends the company’s imagination and solid engineering practices to cultivate the world’s best integrated technologies of the NGV field. Lobbying to establish laws, regulations, and standards for safety as well as developing private sector funding through banking and financing industries, NGVI stays active towards the growth of the already blossoming natural gas markets. The company also explores and nurtures new avenues for government subsidies to expand these natural gas markets. Seizing every opportunity for growth is essential for NGVI to be able to serve society’s constituents and share the environmental, economical benefits of NGVs.
NGVI established a “NGV R&D Center,” the only R&D center in the world solely dedicated to NGV technology. This research and development team of NGVI is making continuous, significant investments to promote natural gas vehicles, low-emission industrial engines (for fork-lifts, electrical generator sets, aerial work platforms, etc.) and to develop bio-gas for use as a vehicle fuel. The team promises a future of clean natural gas to supply to industries and homes and exerts the utmost effort towards the commitment.
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